Hair - Watch yourself (Deep/Dark)

[hair]

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Hi everyone let me know what you think o this please ive not really tried stuff like this before so any feedback would be helpfull

Thanks

[jeanblanc]

I like the atmosphere that you've built, there's a definite sense of menace to the track, although it did become a bit repetitive. Could be improved a lot by bringing in new elements later on in the track I think. Perhaps a new melody/instrument would work well, but it's certainly something worth building on, keep it up.

[hair]

thanks mate i'll look at adding a few things in then .

[hair]

Bump

[wizeguy]

Sounding pretty good, yea maybe add some melody/nice hook... reckon some sorta delayed instrument could possibly sound cool...?

[hair]

Cheers man I've got a couple tracks I'm working on now so I'll keep what you said in mind

[vyvyan]

Hi,

That's right, there is a very good basis, but to my ears it's missiong something, even for a minimal track. May be missing of some pads to give some deeper atmosphere, even a bass pad would be nice, for example during the break... and it would keep the deep and minimal atmosphere!

Good work!

May you comment also?
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530

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[hair]

thanks man i can see what you mean with the break tbh i'll look at adding soething and see how it works.
thanks