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New tune from a new member...
http://s62.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=35IF ... MN76SD2W3G
feedback much apreciated
i will return the favour
cheers in advance
feedback much apreciated
i will return the favour
cheers in advance
Re: New tune from a new member...
either yousendit is broken or the link is wrong... I reckon its probably yousendit...Sublevel wrote:http://s62.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=35IF ... MN76SD2W3G
feedback much apreciated
i will return the favour
cheers in advance
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this is a cool track, nice sounds, bassline and production. the only thing I'd critise is the length of time it takes to build up. for me the intro is too long, and to have to wait over 5 mins for the track to really kick in is too long for me (although it is wicked when it get there). I guess a lot of this is personal preference, but I'd like to hear this get to the point a little quicker. other than that, this is really good work 

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The little faint echo of the clap at the start annoys me a bit
i don't particularly think that the sound of the 909 percussion fits with the track
the raspy saw wave is a bit feeble, and too high - i think it could do with some low pass filtering
i like the introduction of the hat thingy which is quite fast
i'm getting a bit bored of the song by this stage
nice drop, but it's kinda the same as the rest of the track
definitely needs to sustain interest better
i would shorten this song a lot.
i don't particularly think that the sound of the 909 percussion fits with the track
the raspy saw wave is a bit feeble, and too high - i think it could do with some low pass filtering
i like the introduction of the hat thingy which is quite fast
i'm getting a bit bored of the song by this stage
nice drop, but it's kinda the same as the rest of the track
definitely needs to sustain interest better
i would shorten this song a lot.
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I wouldn't shorten the song itself... I like having a lot of record to work with. I would go for a shorter trip to the peak, however...
I'm not the type to leave a track playing for 4-5 minutes to get to the point... think about it this way-- if I'm at the club and some DJ is playing this track, I'll be standing around staring at him/her for 5 minutes, wondering when the fucking beat is gonna drop.
5 minutes of noone dancing is bad news, I wanna see bouncing titties. Work on making them titties shake.
I'm not the type to leave a track playing for 4-5 minutes to get to the point... think about it this way-- if I'm at the club and some DJ is playing this track, I'll be standing around staring at him/her for 5 minutes, wondering when the fucking beat is gonna drop.
5 minutes of noone dancing is bad news, I wanna see bouncing titties. Work on making them titties shake.
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