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Hero
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by Hero » Mon Jan 09, 2012 3:18 am
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please, id like constructive comments from people who have an ear and experience. Ive been producing quite sometime now, let me know if your hear anything over powering in mix-down. Ive also have been told i need more elements between 2:00-3:00 witch im not sure about.

please comment and give me your thoughts

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Hero
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by Hero » Mon Jan 09, 2012 7:30 am
come on now

dont be shy mates

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ChekOneTwo
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by ChekOneTwo » Mon Jan 09, 2012 7:23 pm
One comment I would make is that your vocals sound off. Sounds like the girl is singing in the wrong key?
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ChekOneTwo
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by ChekOneTwo » Mon Jan 09, 2012 7:23 pm
The track btw sounds good! Really clean sound....
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vyvyan
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by vyvyan » Mon Jan 09, 2012 8:19 pm
I agree with ChekOneTwo, this would be much better without this girl singing. Though I also think the rest needs some more peripheric sounds, particularly when there are just this synth going on. And I'm not a fan of the synth, but it is more personal taste... you should add some tiny echo to it, to give it some more "body".
May you comment?
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=230530
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zillion
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by zillion » Mon Jan 09, 2012 9:59 pm
Yer take the vocals as their out of key and dont really fit in the track....
I can see where your going with it just needs to leveled out majorly....
It gets really loud in places then really quiet...
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Kpin
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by Kpin » Wed Jan 11, 2012 1:59 am
how the hell do you have so many plays? O_O
i agree with the other dudes, out of key vocals and the levels need ajusted
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