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vyvyan
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by vyvyan » Wed Jan 11, 2012 9:52 pm
Hi there!
I think this track has some nice potential, but I see various stuffs that annoy me a bit:
- The kick is distorted, maybe too high (maybe linked to the soundcloud quality)
- Your way to cut the osc-synth is not "thin", if you know what I mean. At 1:23 for example, you could add some echoed something (a light snare with echo & delay would be nice from my point of view). and the other cuts are also a lil bit too "dry" from my point of view
- I do like too much this main synth to be honest, I think you should go deeper or more aggressive, but here it sounds cheap. and you should wobble it a lil bit also, would add some great effect!
It may sound a lot of problems, but with them corrected you track would be great! great amosphere and all the rest, I really like!
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