House Production Feeedback Thread

[malabuandcoki]

Yo, I've been looking for some feedback on some of my tracks.
However in the production threads, its all people making midrange dubstep. They arent exactly the right audience to gain advice from. I wondered if anyone else had the same feelings. (if there is already a house thread for this please let me know)

Anyways heres my unfinished tune.
If anyone wants feedback on their stuff i'd be happy to provide.
it would be good to have a thread of only house/etc tunes
safe
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[wobbles]

this is very much needed, dubs section is god awful

cool tune, very stripped back

[kip-kip]

hello everyone, this is my track. could really use the feedback. thanks

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[hutyluty]

Yo, I've been looking for some feedback on some of my tracks.
However in the production threads, its all people making midrange dubstep. They arent exactly the right audience to gain advice from. I wondered if anyone else had the same feelings. (if there is already a house thread for this please let me know)

Anyways heres my unfinished tune.
If anyone wants feedback on their stuff i'd be happy to provide.
it would be good to have a thread of only house/etc tunes
safe
Soundcloud

nice tune man, i love the way it drops at 1:00. However i think the tructure lacks a little bit. I think for the first bit it moves along well getting bassier and bassier- it loses the rhythmical edge to the bass drums though with the sub underneath which imo it doesn't need, the bit at 1:59 to 2:55 could be dropped altogether- the drop there is fire! Also the tune could do with a breakdown at some point where the drums drop out so that when they come back in again theres more of an impact seeng as you kind of get immune to the rhythm as they just continue pounding on, meaning the drops lose their impact.

Also, I'd change the panning on the hi hat so that its not always in the left ear but moves around through automation which'd give more movement to the tune. Also, i'd make the chords after the drums come in a bit stabbier and shorter so they don't drag the groove behind. Good tune , most of these points are just personal opnion

hello everyone, this is my track. could really use the feedback. thanks

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Love the chords in the intro, really nice stuff and then the drop is beautifully rhythmic- only thing I would maybe do is remove some of the bass from the panning synth as on my headphones it kind of overpowers the kicks/toms. Really beautiful work! Post here when it's finished please


Here's mine- a WIP

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[kip-kip]

Thanks for that hutyluty much appreciated.

As for your track, it's BIG man!

Love that synth and the 2nd drop percussion is awesome. Def post it when it's done I'm really feelin it

[HezioN]