Sound Warrior - LOL (Filth)

[The Jaft]

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take a listen if you want. i'll give feedback for feedback, so tell me what you think!

[The Jaft]

really? nobody?

[Toolman4]

I really like the intro. Good tension and contrast to what will follow. However, that first section that showcases the first wobble....Ditch it. I think that there isn't enough novelty in that section to carry the listener to the next section wherein you introduce more novel sounds and build on arrangement. This is the meat/best part/most developed section of your track. Run with this only as the main idea. Also develop your sounds further. Layers, movement etc, but you def have the basic "arrangement theory" down for creating grooves.

[The Jaft]

thanks for listening man! I was actually just talking to one of my friends about that first section, and that is exactly what i ended up deciding haha. I understand what you mean movement, and layer wise so i'll work on that for the time being. thanks a bunch for your input!

[Gurmi]

holy shit you're from Portland as well.

[Barbosa1405]

Really Like the intro but the drop does not do it justice, practice will make perfect though mate and you got good ideas...keep everything more tidy, sounds like quite a few frequencies battling with each other..

Cheers

[Squ1bbles]

You've definitely got a lot of frequencies punching each other in the face, but your idea of how a song should work is pretty solid. When you bring in your low synths it seems sudden and awkward, though. Keep at it.

[The Jaft]

holy shit you're from Portland as well.

Portlanders unite! haha

Really Like the intro but the drop does not do it justice, practice will make perfect though mate and you got good ideas...keep everything more tidy, sounds like quite a few frequencies battling with each other..

You've definitely got a lot of frequencies punching each other in the face, but your idea of how a song should work is pretty solid. When you bring in your low synths it seems sudden and awkward, though. Keep at it.

2 people said it so it must be true. i'll work on it!thanks a bunch for your feed back!im still learning ableton, i started with it about 2 weeks ago, so i think by the time im comfortable in the program/know how to operate all the devices and what not. things should sound better. thanks again!