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																			 Barbosa1405
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								by Barbosa1405 » Thu Jan 26, 2012 12:17 pm
			
			
			
			
			Reworked Young Pride and Got it sounding stronger, looking for feedback, please let me know what you think..beefed up the kick now and also some of the other sounds,, actually may have pushed it too much but not sure, looking for other opinions pls.. nice one.   
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								by krease » Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:22 pm
			
			
			
			
			i think your kick needs to be more prominent, theres some good sounds in here though ! nice tune.
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Barbosa1405 » Thu Jan 26, 2012 10:24 pm
			
			
			
			
			nice one bruv, yeh noticed last night, cheers for confirming - I need to get a bit of low frequency back in the kick. cheers mate
			
			
									
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								by Barbosa1405 » Fri Jan 27, 2012 12:18 am
			
			
			
			
			any second opinions ?
			
			
									
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								by Gurmi » Fri Jan 27, 2012 12:48 am
			
			
			
			
			hell yeah! sounds really good.
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by The Jaft » Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:01 am
			
			
			
			
			i liked it, clean, well produced. just my taste, but i feel it's too long. again, well produced keep it up 

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								by Barbosa1405 » Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:50 am
			
			
			
			
			Nice one 'The Jaft', really appreciate that mate and glad you like it...
			
			
									
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								by ElSonido » Fri Jan 27, 2012 9:26 am
			
			
			
			
			Vocal sample and chord stabs are in different keys.  Which may or may not be the intention.
Some great sounding elements for dark dubstep.  I'm loving the vibes.  Nice and dark.
Your kick has zero bottom end. 
Sub is nice and deep.  Love that.  
The element that comes in every second bar.  That would really sound huge if you beefed it up.  Copy, octave down, layer it up.  Give it some presence.   
Damn good work so far.  Nice and restrained.
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Barbosa1405 » Sun Jan 29, 2012 8:16 am
			
			
			
			
			Cheers Elsonido, thats really helpful mate and will get on to getting the track sounding better soon..will take all of what you said here and apply to the tune...nice one ! 

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								by Barbosa1405 » Tue Jan 31, 2012 5:07 pm
			
			
			
			
			Right, I have gone back and beefed up the tune, looking for feedback, think its sounding much better (i REPLACED THE FIRST POST)
			
			
									
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								by Barbosa1405 » Tue Jan 31, 2012 11:29 pm
			
			
			
			
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								by Barbosa1405 » Wed Feb 01, 2012 4:06 am
			
			
			
			
			bmping again, tune sounding much better in my opinion...hope to get some more ideas/feedback....anythin g missing ?  

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								by Barbosa1405 » Wed Feb 01, 2012 7:13 am
			
			
			
			
			Have just made it available for free DL, please leave comment if you decide to Download... cheers
			
			
									
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								by Electric_Head » Wed Feb 01, 2012 3:54 pm
			
			
			
			
			serious amount of beefing up required on the kick
it`s virtually non-existent
possibly add a spacey pad over the top?
your wub wub sound can use some doubling and expanding
make it big and dominant
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								by Barbosa1405 » Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:42 am
			
			
			
			
			Nice one mate, keep having to go back to the kick, but think just need to turn it up a bit....will also go back and get the wub wub sounding more wide. 
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								by Electric_Head » Thu Feb 02, 2012 5:52 am
			
			
			
			
			the kick is really lost in the mix
either turn it up but I`d think you may have some eq issues 
in general it`s a solid tune, well mixed.
Just the kick really I have a prob with.
the track itself sounds very wide and spacious
			
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
				
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								by Barbosa1405 » Thu Feb 02, 2012 10:54 pm
			
			
			
			
			cheers mate, really helpful - will have a new version up in the next few days...got it sounding better..

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