Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of triplets

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Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of triplets

Post by Floop » Sun Feb 19, 2012 10:37 pm

Last edited by Floop on Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:12 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill

Post by Floop » Mon Feb 20, 2012 1:58 am

bump

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill

Post by ChEEzin » Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:31 am

Nice! Really enjoyed the build up in the beginning. Also grabbed the download! It felt like 2:04 - 2:30 could be a little longer, but other than that good work!

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill

Post by davwuh » Mon Feb 20, 2012 2:58 pm

some nice ideas in here, here's some feedback

the little piano bit is nice, but alternate the velocity on the notes to make it to make it sound less robotic.. move the notes just a little off precision too, to make it sound a bit more human

also, the rest of the track eats over the piano when it comes in with the rest of it, so just sort the mastering levels out a bit.. maybe a bit more treble on the piano, turn everything else down a little bit.. a good tip: less is more.. turning the volume right up doesn't necessarily mean a louder track

good idea for a track though, but just needs a little work o nit
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Re: Floop - Triple Kill

Post by Floop » Mon Feb 20, 2012 8:10 pm

I did edit the velocity for each note.

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by Floop » Tue Feb 21, 2012 2:12 am

bumpity bump

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by Floop » Tue Feb 21, 2012 8:13 pm

bump

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by Floop » Fri Feb 24, 2012 3:11 pm

Fuck it, last bump and I give up.

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by xstatic » Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:57 pm

i don't think the piano sounds robotic. it's really nice. it's a weird contrast when you have both the heavy synths playing along side the gentle piano melody at the end. also the crashes should probably be turned down in volume to make them more subtle/less grating. overall, it's good work. most "brostep" producers couldn't write a piano melody like that so big up
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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by Dzanjin » Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:36 pm

I like the overall track. I started playing piano when I was 6 so I appreciate the piano piece in this. I think the midrange synths are pretty good too, it's a nice catchy lead. Besides some really tiny details the big thing that has been mentioned previously is the loudness of certain elements. For example the gregorian monks chanting is really loud comparatively. And the crash is killing the song. It really needs to be turned down a lot and/or maybe grab a couple different crashes and uses them intermittently throughout the track. I'm not saying "needs" to be turned down as in trying to tell you how to make music, but just opinion. I really like the song the farther into it gets, but I almost have to stop because of the crashes. Simple fix though!
And really pretty good for only one or two minor things you know? Good job Floop! Keep em coming man, we'll be here ;-)

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by Floop » Mon Feb 27, 2012 3:17 pm

Yeah, the crashes only got that crazy after I put a compresser on the master.

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by soapymcgee » Tue Feb 28, 2012 1:07 am

Awesome job. I'm not so much a fan of the piano, but that's just my taste. You're really good at it though.

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by bozoy » Tue Feb 28, 2012 2:27 am

if you want even more views and comments on it, try this website out: www.cloudkillers.com/register.php?aff=8100
its pretty legit, it works by commenting on another artist track to get one back.

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Re: Floop - Triple Kill (Brostep, I guess) Heavy use of trip

Post by ehbes » Tue Feb 28, 2012 3:57 am

bozoy wrote:if you want even more views and comments on it, try this website out: http://www.cloudkillers.com/register.php?aff=8100
its pretty legit, it works by commenting on another artist track to get one back.
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