obZen - Catch me ( Dark, Minimal )

[obzen]

Hey guys, here is the latest track i've made on a dark ambient vibe
Feedback is always appreciated !
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[obzen]

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[Hircine]

aren't those vocals from a high rankin sample pack? anyway, lose then, a bit more of reverb on the hats and play with the velocity so you get more groovy dynamics. Then I'd be able to say that I actually liked that tune.

[obzen]

Thanks for the feedback mate! Yeah I completely agree about the hats now you mentioned it. I'll sort that tomoro with a fresh pair of ears.
So you think I should lose the vocals completely? I personally like the vocals lol

[xstatic]

nice tune. feelin the sub movement. really pulls at you

[el-tel]

nice overall sound...
dont see why you cant use the samples, if it works well, why not?

[JamieSky]

I have fallen in love with this tune man, brilliant work.I personally think the vocals work quite well, although I think they might sound better when playing around with a low pass filter. However it's only an idea and may actually sound terrible lol.

[obzen]

Cheers mate do you mean try cutting some of the lower frequencies to give it a more distant eery feel? If you want a 320 let me know man

[Electric_Head]

Solid tune, nice thick bass and well used reverbs.

[obzen]

Thanks mate. Deffinatly need to add a touch of verb and adjust the velocities of the hats I recon!
I produce on headphones and after listening through my mates system it sounds as though the vocals are a little to loud. Can someone with studio monitors give me some feedback on levels please? Thanks