BlueStray - So Alone (Dubstep/Remix)

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runrandy91
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BlueStray - So Alone (Dubstep/Remix)

Post by runrandy91 » Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:55 pm

Hey guys, this is a song I made a couple days ago. I've been trying to get better at "sampling"...there's a lot of random screams in the beginning but it still flows with the song. Let me know what you think or how I can improve. Thanks!!
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Re: BlueStray - So Alone (Dubstep/Remix)

Post by XeniK » Thu Mar 08, 2012 10:25 pm

the outro sounds realy cool !

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Re: BlueStray - So Alone (Dubstep/Remix)

Post by wub » Fri Mar 09, 2012 8:35 am

Midrange bass sounds in the intro and all those random samples sound very messy, and doesn't really gel together. The vocal sounds totally out of place as well. Overall, this is just a bit too disjointed to work properly as a tune.

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Re: BlueStray - So Alone (Dubstep/Remix)

Post by runrandy91 » Sat Mar 10, 2012 3:04 am

I had a lot of trouble trying to get the eq right...still in the process of learning. But I agree it is over sampled and quite chaotic. I didn't spend a lot of time on this one, just wanted to try something different. Thanks for the feedback!

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Re: BlueStray - So Alone (Dubstep/Remix)

Post by runrandy91 » Sat Mar 10, 2012 6:55 am

wub wrote:Midrange bass sounds in the intro and all those random samples sound very messy, and doesn't really gel together. The vocal sounds totally out of place as well. Overall, this is just a bit too disjointed to work properly as a tune.
Well....strong opinion, and respectfully accepted..any suggestions man??

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Re: BlueStray - So Alone (Dubstep/Remix)

Post by Sekk Muddle » Sat Mar 10, 2012 5:50 pm

Sorry... but this tune is a fuckin mess :/

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