On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

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On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by KAI » Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:06 am

NEW TUNE, HOPE YOU APPRECIATE IT!

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Re: On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by subsonik » Tue Mar 13, 2012 11:23 am

Nice lil tune mate, what you using to produce?

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Re: On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by polho » Wed Mar 14, 2012 2:31 pm

This sounds like a Loefah tune except it isn't. Really sick, love the interplay shakers and hats. Now just keep it for five minutes.

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Re: On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by Shaion » Wed Mar 14, 2012 3:03 pm

Hi! Nobody really cares, how old you are. It's the music that matters.

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First off, it's repetitive as hell, but luckily it's short, so it doesn't really get that annoying.
Could definitely use some better EQing there, especially on that bass. It sounds really 'closed' as it is now.
The clap could use a bit more low end for some punch and maybe some less tail... Alternatively don't use it that much. Right now, it sounds like a perfect hit to use a few times after every two bars or so.
The kick should be brought a bit more to the front and using a different sample could also be worth a try. Namely something a bit more balanced, not a deep low one that gets lost in the bass.


But keep at it. I like the overall atmosphere you've created, just needs a bit more finishing touch.
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Re: On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by xstatic » Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:22 pm

i think you need to eq that kick to cut off the low end. it sounds like it's interfering with the sub a bit. also im not feeling those low clicky sounds, not totally sure why tbh.
on the positive side, the beat has a nice swing/shuffle to it, but i agree with Shaion that you should use the claps less frequently.
it actually pisses me off a bit when people advertise their age and location in their track title. who gives a shit anyway? we're all some age, and we're all from somewhere, so if no one asks, you should assume no one cares
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Re: On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by KAI » Fri Mar 16, 2012 11:25 am

thanks for the advice, looking forward to master EQ in studio....
the reason my age is mentioned, is that I feel slightly shy about starting out!
also the place I live is important, as I would like to meet up with local or other musicians in europe.

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Re: On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by KAI » Fri Mar 16, 2012 11:26 am

LLLLLOVE LOEFAH!

saw coki last weekend and it was a hurricane blast !!!!!!!

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Re: On Coki (DEEP DUBSTEP) 17 y.o producer from GENEVA

Post by particle-jim » Fri Mar 16, 2012 2:58 pm

KAI wrote:also the place I live is important, as I would like to meet up with local or other musicians in europe.
There's quite a healthy scene over there in switzerland mate, check out my buddy Phrex and his crew Blazin Dubz holding it down in Bern :W:
imami wrote:i put secret donks in all my tunes, just low enough so you can't hear them
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