[FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

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mindsetAUS
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[FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by mindsetAUS » Sun Mar 18, 2012 2:09 pm

hi, its been a while since i finished a track, but this one is from my new group which consists of Beat Baptist and myself doing the production and vocals by Mandi.

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feel free to download it and share it.

more to come from us.. :W:

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Re: [FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by vyvyan » Sun Mar 18, 2012 6:20 pm

Hi!

I think your kick and snare do not go at all with the rest of the track: your kick should be much deeper, and you snare very different (it would sound good for some wobbly, but not here). And I'd also put a slightly deeper sub.
Otherwise, nice track!

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Re: [FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by mindsetAUS » Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:03 am

vyvyan wrote:Hi!

I think your kick and snare do not go at all with the rest of the track: your kick should be much deeper, and you snare very different (it would sound good for some wobbly, but not here). And I'd also put a slightly deeper sub.
Otherwise, nice track!

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Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated.

Speaking of the sub, kick and snare: are the relative levels ok? I think the kick and snare might be too loud??

Is the sub loud enough and its just the pitch that should be lower?

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Re: [FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by vyvyan » Tue Mar 20, 2012 8:52 pm

Hi,

For the levels, maybe the kick is a little bit too loud, but it is quite all right: it is more the style which does not fit!
The level of the snare is ok to my ears, the style again doesn't fit.
The sub level is for me too low, but the pitch of it is ok I believe. Maybe a slight echo would add something, but this is a really tiny detail.

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Re: [FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by mindsetAUS » Sat Mar 24, 2012 7:47 am

vyvyan wrote:Hi,

For the levels, maybe the kick is a little bit too loud, but it is quite all right: it is more the style which does not fit!
The level of the snare is ok to my ears, the style again doesn't fit.
The sub level is for me too low, but the pitch of it is ok I believe. Maybe a slight echo would add something, but this is a really tiny detail.

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Ok, noted. Thanks

When u say 'echo' on the bass, do u mean reverbing the bass a bit?

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Re: [FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by vyvyan » Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:57 pm

Hi,
Yes, I mean this, but this is not so important.
Mainly are the kick and snare to change... But I'm the only one to give a feedback, so maybe this is just my perso feeling: you may get something else from some other people!

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Re: [FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by dubsax outlaw » Mon Mar 26, 2012 3:16 am

niceeeeee onee mate! commented in the player. loving the beat.

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Re: [FREE 320] DRAMATIC ROMANCE - DESIDERATA

Post by mindsetAUS » Sun Apr 01, 2012 2:01 am

Cheers guys. Really appreciate the feedback. It helps immensely.

Next track almost ready ....

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