TripNotic- Magic Potion (cyber bass)

[TripNotic]

Soundcloud
i would really appreciate any feedback

[WhiteApple]

really need some work.
snare need less reverb, especially in lows
synth are tiring, too loud (make drums inaudible), not-organized, seems there no effort on the sound design.
whole track needs structure.
need mixdowns.
the track just feels like random sound poping from nowhere.
not trying to be mean, just trying to help.

[TripNotic]

i appreciate the feedback got to hear it from somebody thats why i post tracks on here

[vyvyan]

Hi,

Not my style, but I recognize it is not bad. Maybe a little bit too messy. I think some "jumpy tics" could give some nice rythm.
In terms of mastering it needs some work, but this is secondary.

Nice work!

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[TripNotic]

goood idea i think i kno what your talking about do you mean like a metronome ? during the random little stringy melodys?

[vyvyan]

such as at 1:16 and 1:19 approx.
Something to give some more rythm and to give some "lightness" to your track!
Listen to what I have on my track "inside" below, from 1.02 you can understand what I mean.

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[TripNotic]

i see what your saying i get carried away with wobbles sometimes haha