Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

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Slangor
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Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by Slangor » Tue Mar 20, 2012 10:27 pm

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What do you think? Constructive feedback!

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by elburz » Tue Mar 20, 2012 10:40 pm

Good work. I'd say work on the intro, it's incredibly lackluster compared to the drop. Maybe filter everything out in the intro, or process the strings. Good tune otherwise.
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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by Akadia » Wed Mar 21, 2012 1:00 am

elburz wrote:Good work. I'd say work on the intro, it's incredibly lackluster compared to the drop. Maybe filter everything out in the intro, or process the strings. Good tune otherwise.
Personally I would say the intro is good how it is because it's nice to listen to and it allows you to build a lot of energy for the drop. Nice track man!

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by Slangor » Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:50 am

Thanks for feedback!

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by TheDiscHo » Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:07 pm

Sweet track man! Musically it's really good, love the double time bits as well. Think the main thing that jumps out for me as something that could be improved is the snare, could maybe do with a bit more slap. Probably just a case of personal preference though! Nice work.

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by boss boi 666 » Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:42 pm

Awesome song! You've improved a lot! Amazing album cover also! Keep it up man;)

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by mthrfnk » Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:49 pm

Your intro is pretty sweet, the build is spot on. Nice fat drop too, i really like the synth stabs you contrast the bass with. Everything sounds nice and full too, good job on the mix. Only one suggestion - the snare, it sounds a tad weak - needs more beef.

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by Triphosphate » Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:28 pm

I've listened to this like 3 times in a row... superb.
Am I the only one that thinks that the snare is too far forward? I'd actually like to hear it a tiny tiny bit in the mix more and with more high end presence or crunch. But overall fantastic. The double time section makes me compulsively move. :D

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by Slangor » Fri Mar 23, 2012 10:13 pm

Great feedback! Thanks. Maybe i'll fix the snare.


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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by Triphosphate » Wed Mar 28, 2012 3:00 pm

I saw your track remixed by someone and on Dubstep.net's feed... congrats!

Edit: I made a sadface when I noticed they linked to the remixer's page but not yours.

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by felixWBO » Fri Mar 30, 2012 3:24 pm

Yah you got this shit down man, good work!

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Re: Slangor - Dragonflies (Drumstep/Clubstep)

Post by Aleckz » Fri Mar 30, 2012 6:04 pm

this is a great track man!
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