Deformat - Brinkmanship (Distance style Minimal)

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Deformat
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Deformat - Brinkmanship (Distance style Minimal)

Post by Deformat » Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:49 am

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This is my first stab at a Dubstep tune, But it still needs something I can't put my finger on...


Thoughts?
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Re: Deformat - Brinkmanship (Distance style Minimal)

Post by Riddles » Mon Apr 02, 2012 9:42 am

have you mixed this down? it sound a bit muddy and i think its the mixdown. also your percussion is very samey, mix it up and make it a bit more exciting. the kick seems very flat and i dont think quite works but again it could be the mixdown. also i dont like the weird growls after the drop, they dont sound great to me but thats just my opinion.

Youve got some good ideas here but just need to work on the details i think.
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Re: Deformat - Brinkmanship (Distance style Minimal)

Post by Deformat » Mon Apr 02, 2012 11:12 am

Yeah, I'm still working on my mixing skills. Thanks!
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Re: Deformat - Brinkmanship (Distance style Minimal)

Post by Phase Down » Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:42 pm

Nice stuff but hasnt really got a hook! Also the whole track needs a re mix!
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Re: Deformat - Brinkmanship (Distance style Minimal)

Post by Deformat » Mon Apr 02, 2012 4:51 pm

I'm terrible at hooks. XP

But at least now I know that I'm headed in the right direction here. Gonna take a gander at the dubstep production tips with you guy's advice in mind before I try another track.


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