Varin - You are fired because... (dubstep)

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Varin - You are fired because... (dubstep)

Post by varin » Fri May 04, 2012 11:55 pm

Hi there, need feedback please as this is my first attempt to create dubstep. It's unfinished track, there are some glitches in the last 45 seconds or so. I need your criticism regarding levels and EQ. Any comments will be much appreciated!

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Re: Varin - You are fired because... (dubstep)

Post by varin » Mon May 07, 2012 11:07 am

Wow.. Anyone? Any tips?
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Re: Varin - You are fired because... (dubstep)

Post by Descended » Mon May 07, 2012 6:58 pm

The background noices in your track are too loud.
And try to work on your synth's, the modulation is good but the sound is a lil bit weak.
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Re: Varin - You are fired because... (dubstep)

Post by varin » Mon May 07, 2012 11:26 pm

Descended wrote:The background noices in your track are too loud.
And try to work on your synth's, the modulation is good but the sound is a lil bit weak.

Thanks man, I appreciate your comment. There is quite a lot of background wobble going on, and yeah, I agree, there is not much bass and it sounds bit weak. I'm working on something new right now, and It does sound 3 times better than this tune. I might remix this one this week, I have learned a lot during this week, and I can improve it now :)
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