My first full dubstep track, Please tell me what you think!

[CVRS]

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Please tell me what i can do better and what you like about the track!

If you like it please check out these pages, more music is on the way and I'm just getting started.

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Thanks for the support

[CVRS]

Please give some feedback!

[RhythmicSin]

its a good start, look into mastering the final mix. it could be more full and the bass will thump more if you master it. dont be afraid to push the bass into the red with dubstep.

[CVRS]

Okay thanks!

[slaybrahamlincoln]

Awesome for your first try. I'd get a thicker kick, use a riser and have a tits drop and maybe go a little more minor on your scales. Other than that, good shit.

I just posted my first dubstep track too a couple forum posts down, check it out holmes.

[agus69]

its a good start, look into mastering the final mix. it could be more full and the bass will thump more if you master it. dont be afraid to push the bass into the red with dubstep.

DO NOT push anything into the RED when you are mixing. that's worst advice I've seen on this board yet! you got a good start, but i would change the bass noise. that wobble shit is getting old and this tune has a ton of potential.

Keep on rockin'.

[CVRS]

Thanks both of you! Alright - so I shall do less wobble? I really feel like I want some more melodic elements in the "chorus part". I'll see what I can do with the kick, yeah I know that i shouldn't put it in the red I've been mastering other stuff so I know that it will destroy any speakers that you use if you out it in the red. Thanks for the awesome feedback though! I really appreciate it! Follow me on soundcloud if you want to hear more in the future.

Slaybrahamlincoln I'll check out your track as well!

[el-tel]

wet those beats up man...

[CVRS]

what do you mean wet?

[el-tel]

A bit of reverb, delay, fuck about with the FX, EQ an that. Make the beats stand out more.
Good tune tho man, i like it.

[CVRS]

Okay I get it, I'll do that! Thanks man I appreciate it!

[el-tel]

No problem man, what do you think of my tune?

[bferg333]

best damn first song I've ever heard. keep at it.

[CVRS]

Thanks man! I will! I'll comment on yours el-tel too

[CVRS]

El-tel I thought your song was great, try working on using "white noise" for your risers and not just the kick or the snare, otherwise i thought it was really dope. Keep it up!

[Simpski]

What program you use?

[CVRS]

Ableton Live

[SenatorJohnDean]

Sub is really good. This has a chipstep feel, which I like.

[CVRS]

Thanks so much!

[Shadrach]

I love the melody, but less wobble as they said above. That snare though. big up.