Headhunterz-The Point of MF Perfection(Thalass Remix)*Dirty*

[Thalass]

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Feedback please!'m amateur trying to get signed and shit so if anyone wants to team up or anything let me know.

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[Thalass]

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[Thalass]

need feedback

[phatta]

I can hear a lot of good things in this...

firstly, I appreciated how you combined hardstyle and dubstep

imo, a bassier kick would perform a lot better (i know you have that distorted kick layered with that bass, but it tends to drown out other sounds like the synth; so you may want to reconsider what you want to use with that), and aim to make your main saw lead a lot bigger (pan it out, layer it etc.)
one good thing would be to try and shake up that melody using for example, glitch, automated filter, tapestop, etc endless possibilities, this gives more interest to the listener.
also, try to consider the form of the piece, i.e. intro --> buildup --> drop --> breakdown etc etc (like maybe introduce the melody first, then come in with some hihats, and then drums and build on and on from there)

you don't have to do these things because most of it is just personal taste and fel free to criticise the feedback

Sounding good!

[Thalass]

I can hear a lot of good things in this...

firstly, I appreciated how you combined hardstyle and dubstep

imo, a bassier kick would perform a lot better (i know you have that distorted kick layered with that bass, but it tends to drown out other sounds like the synth; so you may want to reconsider what you want to use with that), and aim to make your main saw lead a lot bigger (pan it out, layer it etc.)
one good thing would be to try and shake up that melody using for example, glitch, automated filter, tapestop, etc endless possibilities, this gives more interest to the listener.
also, try to consider the form of the piece, i.e. intro --> buildup --> drop --> breakdown etc etc (like maybe introduce the melody first, then come in with some hihats, and then drums and build on and on from there)

you don't have to do these things because most of it is just personal taste and fel free to criticise the feedback

Sounding good!

I thank you for it!
My structure for the song was made out of confusion because I don't really know how to structure a Dubstyle track.
I'm working on it right now as typing.
I used Massive on all the Lead, Synths, and Bass and probably tried to use Gross Beat to get some more glitch in there.
and I'll look up how to make build-ups because I don't make hardstyle really lol I make Dubstep, Drum and Bass, Drumstep, Electro House,and I make rap beats.
The rest I'll know how to do.
How do you know so much about producing?

[phatta]

I dont really haha
i just watch a fuckload of tutorials