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Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:35 am

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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by aeherts12 » Fri Jun 01, 2012 5:50 am

Holy crap that second drop was absolutely nuts. the bass is so gritty i love it. I still can't get over how amazing 2:06 was.. is that a download link I see? Snatching this shit up RIGHT NOW. good freaking work. What can you improve? ummmmm.. gimme like two weeks to invent a reason for you to improve on this.

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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by Talált » Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:13 am

DAMNNNNN man that was probably the sickest new song i've heard until the second drop man. i remember the first time i heard right in.... i'm sorry, it's a sick tune EVERYTHING about it minus that high pitched b/s. i mean i have no idea what your intentions are for making music but my only bit of tech would be to add a sub bass track.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by topmo3 » Fri Jun 01, 2012 9:33 am

there's little bass to the tune. it also sounds like it was falling apart a bit. not feeling the tune at all. also what's happening at 2nd drop?? those high pitched notes don't fit at all and they're way too loud and stand out in the mix.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:23 pm

aeherts12 wrote:Holy crap that second drop was absolutely nuts. the bass is so gritty i love it. I still can't get over how amazing 2:06 was.. is that a download link I see? Snatching this shit up RIGHT NOW. good freaking work. What can you improve? ummmmm.. gimme like two weeks to invent a reason for you to improve on this.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Fri Jun 01, 2012 8:24 pm

Talált wrote:DAMNNNNN man that was probably the sickest new song i've heard until the second drop man. i remember the first time i heard right in.... i'm sorry, it's a sick tune EVERYTHING about it minus that high pitched b/s. i mean i have no idea what your intentions are for making music but my only bit of tech would be to add a sub bass track.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by Talált » Fri Jun 01, 2012 10:27 pm

your midrange bass makes me wanna cream seriously, how'd you get that?
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:51 am

Talált wrote:your midrange bass makes me wanna cream seriously, how'd you get that?
Just a massive patch with the free vst camelcrusher. My advice is definitely use the parabolic shaper inside massive, it makes everything sound gritty as fuck. Also the bandreject filter is great for interesting sounds. Cheers! :)
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Sat Jun 02, 2012 2:02 pm

Bump!!
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by Climax » Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:37 pm

This is good shit man srs


I like everything. My one gripe is the beepy high pitched wobble at the second drop.. Something abt it sounds out o place or maybe just a little off time or something idk

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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Sat Jun 02, 2012 4:55 pm

Climax wrote:This is good shit man srs


I like everything. My one gripe is the beepy high pitched wobble at the second drop.. Something abt it sounds out o place or maybe just a little off time or something idk
Yeah I kind of agree... Ill probably fix that up soon but I wanted to add something extra to the second drop.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by lloydy » Sat Jun 02, 2012 5:08 pm

Great track for the bro side of things,must admit though i have to agree with other posters the second drop you should definitely lose that high pitched sound because it just doesn't fit the tune and is well to loud compared to the other elements.Also you could do with adding a sub or making it louder because my headphones didn't really pick it up that well and they are normally really good with the lows.Must say though veryvery impressed with the beats.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Sat Jun 02, 2012 5:22 pm

lloydy wrote:Great track for the bro side of things,must admit though i have to agree with other posters the second drop you should definitely lose that high pitched sound because it just doesn't fit the tune and is well to loud compared to the other elements.Also you could do with adding a sub or making it louder because my headphones didn't really pick it up that well and they are normally really good with the lows.Must say though veryvery impressed with the beats.
Thanks for the feed back! It does have a subbass layer under it but the main note is a G hitting at 40 something hz. My headphones can't pick it up real good either. And with so many people not liking the high pitched wobble, ill definitely get that outta there. Must say though I love the amount of feedback that's recently been going on here.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by lloydy » Sat Jun 02, 2012 6:30 pm

OfficialDAPT wrote: Must say though I love the amount of feedback that's recently been going on here.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Sun Jun 03, 2012 12:38 am

BlackOut Project Frk wrote:Great track ! Drops are huges !
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:35 am

lloydy wrote:
OfficialDAPT wrote: Must say though I love the amount of feedback that's recently been going on here.
Have a look for my track further down the page then :6:
I will later when I'm on a computer and not my phone.
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by ZACKBLAK » Sun Jun 03, 2012 3:00 am

Unfortunately man, I agree with the others. The Skill Is There :) But the high pitch on the second end doesn't really fit well, especially if it is that loud in the mix. May I also suggest "Sandwiching" Your Mid range drop bass with sub bass & white noise. Make The white noise really low, like almost unnoticeable, and the sub should speak for itself man, if it overpowers the mid range, then lower it, but you want the sub to be booming. :) That is all!

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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by OfficialDAPT » Sun Jun 03, 2012 3:20 am

ZACKBLAK wrote:Unfortunately man, I agree with the others. The Skill Is There :) But the high pitch on the second end doesn't really fit well, especially if it is that loud in the mix. May I also suggest "Sandwiching" Your Mid range drop bass with sub bass & white noise. Make The white noise really low, like almost unnoticeable, and the sub should speak for itself man, if it overpowers the mid range, then lower it, but you want the sub to be booming. :) That is all!
Can you explain more about this sandwiching technique?
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Re: Dapt - Air Raid [Dubstep/Brostep]

Post by outbound » Sun Jun 03, 2012 5:42 am

I think the bass sound on the 2nd drop works but just too loud. And yeah gimme some more sub!!!! :6:

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