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unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by BroBotik » Thu May 31, 2012 12:10 am


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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by wub » Thu May 31, 2012 7:47 am

This was pretty horrible listening...just sounds like a bass patch with some heavily distorted drums under it. Am usually a fan of the lo-fi vibe, but this sounds very amateurish and hard to follow.

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by Climax » Thu May 31, 2012 8:43 pm

I think you just need some melodic element to help the track flow better, like wub said it doesn't have much direction


The bass is ok, but the percussion and melody needs to be addressed to get it really flowing.


Good start tho!

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by Maccaveli » Fri Jun 01, 2012 3:58 am

:bins:

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by OfficialDAPT » Fri Jun 01, 2012 4:16 am

Maccaveli wrote::bins:
cmon man at least he's trying
7 year old BROstep/Trapstep/Chillstep producer from India. Young. Talented. 7 Years Old. Super skilled for age. Signed to NOW22. Biography written in 3rd person on soundcloud OBVI. The next Skrillex. Wait I don't even like him anymore LOL. Super talented. Only 6 years old.

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by aeherts12 » Fri Jun 01, 2012 5:57 am

people are so much freaking nicer on soundcloud.. smh. props for putting this up man. cant stand people who come into these things and talk crap

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by Maccaveli » Fri Jun 01, 2012 6:11 am

Wub and Climax were giving their honest opinions, and I pretty much agreed with everything they're saying so I posted that image I've been looking for an excuse to use for ages... problem? Sometimes people need to hear negative feedback.

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by BroBotik » Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:24 pm

thanks for the harsh feedback lols, and it is amateur i am not professional, so how about not being so rude and criticizing me as an amateur and not a professional, and its not just some bass patches and distorted drums, there's a lot more work that went into than that lols

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by ehbes » Sun Jun 03, 2012 4:36 pm

its better to have harsh and honest feedback then kind but false feedback any day of the week....
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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by SlayTen » Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:25 am

Is your artist name really brobotik? LOL man stay away from trying to be so filthy and use more melody

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by Maccaveli » Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:17 am

SlayTen wrote:Is your artist name really brobotik? LOL man stay away from trying to be so filthy and use more melody
But then he wouldn't be very brobotik...

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by BroBotik » Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:28 pm

exactly i love really heavy robotic dubstep aka brostep, so why would i produce anything else? i create music for me not for anybody else, its what i am into but it seems like u all like the oldschool dubs which is cool but no reason to troll with no real constructive criticism

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by BroBotik » Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:32 pm

ehbrums1 wrote: true but even honest harsh feedback is filtered through the observers perception according to their taste in music

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by ehbes » Tue Jun 05, 2012 4:12 pm

That's not what I said...
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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by Maccaveli » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:01 pm

No one's trolling ffs, if you take the attitude that anyone who criticizes your music's opinion doesn't matter cos they don't like your kind of music then you'll never improve as a producer. Wub's comment was completely legitimate but it seems you're just gonna write it off as a troll and keep making the same mistakes.

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by MrMush » Tue Jun 05, 2012 8:37 pm

Everything sounds flat to me my friend..

Could use alot of refurbishing

Im still learning myself.. Keep doin your craft bro

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by BroBotik » Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:19 pm

Maccaveli wrote:lols i got no constructive criticism of any sort, he said my drums were distorted with random bass patches, which i dont use much distortion on my drums and its not random, its arranged to my liking, and he said its hard to follow and sounds amateurish, which i am amateur lmao, wow thats so much help for me to improve with lols. so all i get out of all this feedback is the rhythm might not be your style, cool

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by Maccaveli » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:27 am

BroBotik wrote:
Maccaveli wrote:lols i got no constructive criticism of any sort, he said my drums were distorted with random bass patches, which i dont use much distortion on my drums and its not random, its arranged to my liking, and he said its hard to follow and sounds amateurish, which i am amateur lmao, wow thats so much help for me to improve with lols. so all i get out of all this feedback is the rhythm might not be your style, cool
Why the fuck do you keep quoting people and changing what they said??

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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by ehbes » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:34 am

This is what I dont like about the dubs board, some people cant handle the truth
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Re: unsigned heavy dubstep track

Post by Mindforce » Wed Jun 06, 2012 5:06 am

aeherts12 wrote:people are so much freaking nicer on soundcloud..
that's generally just because they're hoping you'll view and give positive feedback on their own music if they compliment yours. You'd never actually improve from someone saying "niiiiiiice wobblez brah, keep droppn the sick rad trackz! Check out my music 2 plz??"

These guys on DSF are just helping (and actually helping) you with what your music needs. Most of them give feedback on 10+ new tunes every week, you can't expect them to praise every one of them.
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