Borgore Style [Talking Basslines] FILTHY - Need Feedback

[Tapika Music]

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Mr. President - Tapika

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHERE I CAN IMPROVE ON THIS TRACK.

Give me FEEDBACK AND COMMENT PLEASE!!

[Elephantitan]

The build up is actually good- which is something not a lot get right. however, the Drop is simply not kicking enough. i think its the drums, they need more clash during the drop. Perhaps experiment with some hats and place some Crashes/open hats to give it more oomph.

Otherwise its cool.

[willzy]

The bassline is cool but I Lol'd at the stock FL studio drums

[ehbes]

yay someone found modern talking

[Mindforce]

This is nothing like borgore... Not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing -_-

[TeRRo]

yay someone found modern talking

[Climax]

its a good start it just seems kinda repetitive and the drums need some beef like others have said,

but good job on the talking bass

[Talált]

download some samples. watch youtube vids, read tutorials, experiment with software. sit on this forum. continue to impress your friends because you make dubstep.

[daeMTHAFKNkim]

Not horribly bad. But it isn't something I'll listen to on my own time either.. You have potential that I can see cuz my shit sounded like that when I was starting off. You have structure, rhythm, and timing down. It's hella repetitive etc. but that's okay for now I guess.

The style sounds more like Eptic/Habstrakt but a hundred steps down from their production quality. So a pretty much noob version of them.

Keep at it dude

[randol35]

i would like to hear this with some more work on layering/compressing the drums and getting more bass than modern talking on the bassline.