The Path We Walk - Liquid DnB 172 Bpm

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Fifth Paradox
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The Path We Walk - Liquid DnB 172 Bpm

Post by Fifth Paradox » Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:58 pm

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Re: The Path We Walk - Liquid DnB 172 Bpm

Post by randol35 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:28 am

pretty sweet, the drums are solid, and i love that twinkling synth.

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Re: The Path We Walk - Liquid DnB 172 Bpm

Post by wub » Fri Jun 08, 2012 6:31 am

Drums are a bit on the weak side IMO, the kick is lacking a bit and the snare feels a bit thin, like it needs some reverb or something to bring it out more. The drum programming feels very static, like hard quantised, and there isn't a lot of variation from start to finish, like extra hits, so the beat itself gets a bit boring after nearly 5mins.

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Re: The Path We Walk - Liquid DnB 172 Bpm

Post by Sonika » Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:21 am

Yeah the entire mix is leaning towards the mix side - also, on the compositional side of things, something like this which has a slightly climactic vibe to it should have more of a rising action, so to speak. This kind of just warms up with some hits, takes a second break and then goes into its thing - it should build more, incorporating more atmosphere to help it build
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