New tune, kinda trancy dubstep with some twisted basses :)

[VirtualMark]

Just made this one, and as soon as i uploaded it i've already noticed a few things that need tweaking. Always seems to be the way. Anyhow, let me know what you think, i'm just trying out different styles at the moment. I was trying to get a dirty chord sound, but it didn't work out so i put in some wobbles instead.

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[ronnikins22]

Sounds good, I like the vocal sample. And the bass sounds nice!

[VirtualMark]

Cheers, glad you liked it.

Anyone got any criticisms?

[Toby_Dwinger]

Hi mate, decent effort. One thing I would say (and it's just my opinion) is that when the sounds come in at 1:23 and again at 3:40 they're a little overpowering. Maybe it's just that they're too loud, but they don't seem to blend that well.

[ramses020]

Nice tune, think the melodies are cool, agree with Toby tho, you might need to sort out the volume levels in your midrange drop, they don't sound as well blended as they should/could.
Structure wise i think its maybe a bit boring to start the second drop with the vocal chorus. Also after the intro maybe its more exciting to make it drop harder by using some of the wobble sounds. All in all i like this track man, i'd just experiment with the structure a bit.

[Electric_Head]

A change of percussion after the 2nd drop is essential imo.
Sort out the volume issues, add some percussion changes and allow the melody to evolve.

Nice tune even if I'm not interested in the style.

[VirtualMark]

Cool, thanks for the feedback guys its appreciated.