Androk - Jinada (Deep/Dark)

[Androk]

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This is what I'm currently working on. Some feedback would be very appreciated! Thanks!

[Sonika]

I like some bits of the intro, but some of the accidentals and stuff feel like they don't fit. I like the main kick and snare, but the other percussion surrounding it, such as the cowbell, does not fit the dark atmosphere. And I think that midrange should be more natural and less mechanic

[SKIN E]

really liking that weird vocal that comes in the intro, this has quite an unique feel, haha I have to say I did not expect this at all, sounds could of been EQ'd a little bit nicer in my opinion, but that sweep and when the bass comes in is fucking sweet, I actually didn't think this would happen but I really like it & favored, this track is tripping me out - in a good way.

Finish it up, I would say check your levels, and your EQ, just make it all a little bit tighter and nicer and I reckon you got a banger - send it to me when its finished - no joke

[Androk]

Thanks a lot for the feedback. I will look into into those accidentals.. and yeah I know it needs to be EQ'd better. As for those percussion sounds we have different opinions here. I really think they fit ok. The track is a combination between dark stuff and minimal beats. I'm not going for the full dark, dungeon sound. Will do SKIN E. Thanks again i really apreciate you guys taking the time to give me feedback.

[SKIN E]

No problem, I'd just like to say I really like the perc too, would be a shame to take them out

[Androk]

Bump.

[Diadem]

It needs more space, specifically on the snare, rimshot, growls and FX. I really hate that sliced / stretched vocal thing. I don't think it adds much to the track and gets pretty annoying after a while. You might try replacing it with a deep pad.

Beyond that you're off to a good start.