Tetragram - Nyx [Dark Dubstep / Free 320]

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Tetragram - Nyx [Dark Dubstep / Free 320]

Post by Diadem » Wed Jun 20, 2012 8:39 pm

New one. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks for listening.

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Re: Tetragram - Nyx [Dark Dubstep / Free 320]

Post by wub » Thu Jun 21, 2012 3:49 pm

Loving the ominous intro, but it goes on a bit long without the beats coming in. Snare is a bit on the flat side and maybe overly clappy/echoey given the heavy amounts of reverb that surround it. Kick is a little on the flat side and doesn't thud as well as it could, the hats programming feels very rigid and could do with switching up to give some variation.

Liking the bells sample (?) you've got in there, the atmospherics are lovely really dark vibe to it. Second drop section is more of the same comments wise :)

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Re: Tetragram - Nyx [Dark Dubstep / Free 320]

Post by Diadem » Thu Jun 21, 2012 7:36 pm

Thanks for the great feedback, wub. All spot on.

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Re: Tetragram - Nyx [Dark Dubstep / Free 320]

Post by chazzzza » Thu Jun 21, 2012 8:00 pm

agree a lot of what wub said except that the snare is too reverbish if you beefed it up a little I think it could sound great. the hits could do with being a little more skittery, if that makes sense but overall great tune.

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Re: Tetragram - Nyx [Dark Dubstep / Free 320]

Post by zillion » Fri Jun 22, 2012 7:05 pm

Have to agree with what wub has said on this one.

I would have to add that the low end is very cluttered aswell imo.

Atmospheres are intense but would suggest a few more sounds to keep it moving aswell.

Got potential though. Could hear this on some evil soundtrack of some sorts.
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