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Post by Dystinkt » Mon Jul 09, 2012 2:39 am

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got shit all feedback really on my last upload so heres anuvver

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Post by ezza » Mon Jul 09, 2012 10:54 pm

@himmel - feeling this one man & love the bassline. Vocal got a bit much at points though, but maybe thats just me :)

@Cheeky - Not really the sort of house I'm into so can't really critique too much but nice production. One thing I would say is try to turn them hats down a bit or blend them into the mix abit more, the tonal quality just doesn't fit quite right in the mix to me.

Here's a new but from me, sort of techno but I had been listening to allstars 2 all day so I think it kinda got influenced by that abit lol

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Post by phrex » Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:12 am

that is a fucking massive tune agent!

only the vocals... no need for them. sound out of place imho. especcially the pitched up one. use it just veery sparse and it might work!

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Re: Feedback Thread

Post by Dr_Driller » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:01 am

@bkwsk

bkwsk-tungsten >> mixdown sound good, the tracks is well made :)

@Ayatollah

leasy-flatten >> filter and modulate your hithat, layer your drum, bassline sound good but should be compressed and mixed louder

@Capture pt

untitled-dub-looking-for >> groovy & jumpy :) good mixdown maybe you can get the kick a bit louder ?

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105 bpm, rollin bassline, Punjabi MC sample :

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Post by LA_Boxers » Tue Jul 10, 2012 12:39 pm

New WIP from ourselves. Whatchasaying??

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Re: Feedback Thread

Post by billymason » Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:16 pm

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never posted on forum before, just read and listened to stuff, thought i should try the feedback page as just wanna get some honest response and how to better tracks,

something a little darker than normal. getting quite into writting this darker slow stuff..
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Post by billymason » Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:22 pm

@agent47,

really like it, only on laptop speakers now so cant comment, but will check it when im home

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Post by ezza » Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:40 pm

vulvavibration wrote:that is a fucking massive tune agent!

only the vocals... no need for them. sound out of place imho. especcially the pitched up one. use it just veery sparse and it might work!

but...
riddim
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fucking
big!

please make it longer and hit me up when done!
Safe man! finished it aswell now :) will pm you

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Post by ezza » Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:49 pm

Also @ LA Boxers - yeslad :corndance: really nice! bass grooves with drums real well

@ Billymason - Love the bassline & synth work, imo maybe a bit more work on the drums :)
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Post by KoalaBlu » Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:19 pm

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I'm really new at making tunes, so this one is just something with a garage flavour I did kind of quick. Not that much progress or anything, but let me know if anybody has any comments on the rhythms, sounds etc. Just looking for some feedback.

@ Agent 47 - I really like your track, great sounds! The percussion is nice and deep, really feeling it!

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Post by Dr_Driller » Tue Jul 10, 2012 3:04 pm

@Agent 47, agent-47-allstars >> nice kick, to much resonnance on the snare tom, nice groove waiting for a synth on it :)

@LA_Boxers, migjorn-unfinished >> nice mix, maybe the hithat is a bit to loud

welcome-groove-house-preview >> same here for the hit hat

@billymason, untitled >> kick could be have more bass oriented for this genre ? btw there is no bassline so give him more bass :), maybe a synth could complete that groove

@KoalaBlu >> jonsey-told-me >> that kick sound good, you should get high louder on the mix, the synth sequence is not that groovy, drum programming is fine

(i'm at work with headphone, so my comment on mix are not very accurate)

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Post by Ayatollah » Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:31 pm

@cheeky: I like the track, idk about that main synth riff though. imo something else a little bit less electro-ish might suit it better.

@agent: great tune, not sure how I feel about the panning of the vocals. also i agree with vulvavibration, you might try to use them more sparsely. other than that I really like it.

@Dr Driller: the first tune sounds like you're just messing around with the transpose knob and some levels. the second tune is not the kind of dubstep that I'm into so I can't really give you that much feedback on it. the vocal samples are cheesy as hell though, and not in a good way. kind of reminds me of dj wanka.

@LA: this sounds real good, groovy stuff. I'm looking forward to hearing the finished track.

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Post by bkwsk » Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:47 am

@DrDriller: wast that the sample the Punjabi MCs used quite some time ago? :4:


Would any of you care to comment on this one? It's still WIP but I think it might be in the right direction:

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Post by ezza » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:50 pm

@bkwsk Love the synth man! whole track is really nice. imo drums could use maybe a lil bit of work, a bit too hard & straight, try loosen them up a bit.

Heres something I've been working on today, wanted to have a go at some acid sounds for a while now. Any help on the synth would be great :)


EDIT: finished it :) Soundcloud
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Re: Feedback Thread

Post by bkwsk » Thu Jul 12, 2012 9:48 pm

@agent 47: love how gritty it is, good aesthetic use of distortion!

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Post by JimmaJamJamie » Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:13 pm

Agent 47 wrote:EDIT: finished it :) Soundcloud
This is sickk, really feeling the synth and atmosphere.

What did you make the acid loop with?

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Re: Feedback Thread

Post by ezza » Sat Jul 14, 2012 2:06 pm

JimmaJamJamie wrote:
Agent 47 wrote:EDIT: finished it :) Soundcloud
This is sickk, really feeling the synth and atmosphere.

What did you make the acid loop with?
Thanks man glad your feelin it & i made it with lennar digital's sylenth
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Re: Feedback Thread

Post by Tenebriated » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:54 pm

Agent 47 wrote:Soundcloud
The sharpness of the hats is great, as is the sidechained ambience. Here's a new one from me: Soundcloud

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Post by JimmaJamJamie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 6:53 pm

Tenebriated wrote:Here's a new one from me: Soundcloud
This is sooo nice. Loving the percussion and subtle use of vocals.

320 of this would be appreciated.

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Post by bkwsk » Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:34 pm

JimmaJamJamie wrote:
Tenebriated wrote:Here's a new one from me: Soundcloud
This is sooo nice. Loving the percussion and subtle use of vocals.

320 of this would be appreciated.
I agree, very cool track.

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