N33d h41p, fellow dubsteppers. f4f

[fve004]

So this is pretty much it:
I've got a lot of blended feelings about this track, from loads of different people.
Personally I think its still 2 messy, but it has potential.
So, my question: What can I improve, what don't you like and how do I improve?

http://soundcloud.com/fredrikvee/alienzzz/s-3DU4I

And please don't listen with your laptopspeakers

[5910]

Please embed your tunes man
Doesn't seem like there's a whole amount of bass? Dunno if that's what you're going for, cause the tune doesn't really sound like dubstep, but your thread title implies that you were aiming to make dubstep

[fve004]

nahh, dubish. Yeah i know, it lacks bass, fixing that.

[SignalRecon]

Its not bad bro, the dubish part has a nice glitchy space funk flavor. The structure is a bit wierd and obviously its 1.42min but otherwise I think you could turn this into a full song. Just work on a nice pad for your intro, maybe a switch up for the Crescendo/Synth stabs for a part B and then bring it back into your inital drop with a little twist? Just go find a track that you really like and you think fits with this one and follow the structure would be my best advice to you.

[fve004]

yeah, its kinda the whole the point not be like every fucking idiot out there, that sits alone with fl studio and beats off to hentai.
Obv its not the whole song dunno if i'm gonna use a pad for the intro, i quite like it as it is. But that implies that you agree with me ofc.
thanks for the reply, and i like your ideas.
My plans for the track is to tidy it up, add more bass etc, and ofc finishing it.

[fve004]

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