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@himmel - feeling this one man & love the bassline. Vocal got a bit much at points though, but maybe thats just me 
@Cheeky - Not really the sort of house I'm into so can't really critique too much but nice production. One thing I would say is try to turn them hats down a bit or blend them into the mix abit more, the tonal quality just doesn't fit quite right in the mix to me.
Here's a new but from me, sort of techno but I had been listening to allstars 2 all day so I think it kinda got influenced by that abit lol
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@Cheeky - Not really the sort of house I'm into so can't really critique too much but nice production. One thing I would say is try to turn them hats down a bit or blend them into the mix abit more, the tonal quality just doesn't fit quite right in the mix to me.
Here's a new but from me, sort of techno but I had been listening to allstars 2 all day so I think it kinda got influenced by that abit lol
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DiegoSapiens wrote:thats so industrial
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that is a fucking massive tune agent!
only the vocals... no need for them. sound out of place imho. especcially the pitched up one. use it just veery sparse and it might work!
but...
riddim
is
fucking
big!
please make it longer and hit me up when done!
only the vocals... no need for them. sound out of place imho. especcially the pitched up one. use it just veery sparse and it might work!
but...
riddim
is
fucking
big!
please make it longer and hit me up when done!
forthcoming 12", spring/summer 2015:Legend4ry wrote:Well I am still living in that haze that dubstep is about a dark room with a big system, peoples with their heads down and trigger fingers in the air.
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@bkwsk
bkwsk-tungsten >> mixdown sound good, the tracks is well made
@Ayatollah
leasy-flatten >> filter and modulate your hithat, layer your drum, bassline sound good but should be compressed and mixed louder
@Capture pt
untitled-dub-looking-for >> groovy & jumpy
good mixdown maybe you can get the kick a bit louder ?
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i've been tring to make dubstep for long, now it's time for the first tunes out, let me now what you think about it even if it's bad
105 bpm, rollin bassline, Punjabi MC sample :
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bkwsk-tungsten >> mixdown sound good, the tracks is well made

@Ayatollah
leasy-flatten >> filter and modulate your hithat, layer your drum, bassline sound good but should be compressed and mixed louder
@Capture pt
untitled-dub-looking-for >> groovy & jumpy

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i've been tring to make dubstep for long, now it's time for the first tunes out, let me now what you think about it even if it's bad

105 bpm, rollin bassline, Punjabi MC sample :
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140 bpm, loud bassline :
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never posted on forum before, just read and listened to stuff, thought i should try the feedback page as just wanna get some honest response and how to better tracks,
something a little darker than normal. getting quite into writting this darker slow stuff..
thanks
never posted on forum before, just read and listened to stuff, thought i should try the feedback page as just wanna get some honest response and how to better tracks,
something a little darker than normal. getting quite into writting this darker slow stuff..
thanks
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@agent47,
really like it, only on laptop speakers now so cant comment, but will check it when im home
really like it, only on laptop speakers now so cant comment, but will check it when im home
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Safe man! finished it aswell nowvulvavibration wrote:that is a fucking massive tune agent!
only the vocals... no need for them. sound out of place imho. especcially the pitched up one. use it just veery sparse and it might work!
but...
riddim
is
fucking
big!
please make it longer and hit me up when done!

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DiegoSapiens wrote:thats so industrial
soronery wrote:New low
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Also @ LA Boxers - yeslad
really nice! bass grooves with drums real well
@ Billymason - Love the bassline & synth work, imo maybe a bit more work on the drums

@ Billymason - Love the bassline & synth work, imo maybe a bit more work on the drums

DiegoSapiens wrote:thats so industrial
soronery wrote:New low
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I'm really new at making tunes, so this one is just something with a garage flavour I did kind of quick. Not that much progress or anything, but let me know if anybody has any comments on the rhythms, sounds etc. Just looking for some feedback.
@ Agent 47 - I really like your track, great sounds! The percussion is nice and deep, really feeling it!
I'm really new at making tunes, so this one is just something with a garage flavour I did kind of quick. Not that much progress or anything, but let me know if anybody has any comments on the rhythms, sounds etc. Just looking for some feedback.
@ Agent 47 - I really like your track, great sounds! The percussion is nice and deep, really feeling it!
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@Agent 47, agent-47-allstars >> nice kick, to much resonnance on the snare tom, nice groove waiting for a synth on it 
@LA_Boxers, migjorn-unfinished >> nice mix, maybe the hithat is a bit to loud
welcome-groove-house-preview >> same here for the hit hat
@billymason, untitled >> kick could be have more bass oriented for this genre ? btw there is no bassline so give him more bass
, maybe a synth could complete that groove
@KoalaBlu >> jonsey-told-me >> that kick sound good, you should get high louder on the mix, the synth sequence is not that groovy, drum programming is fine
(i'm at work with headphone, so my comment on mix are not very accurate)
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@LA_Boxers, migjorn-unfinished >> nice mix, maybe the hithat is a bit to loud
welcome-groove-house-preview >> same here for the hit hat
@billymason, untitled >> kick could be have more bass oriented for this genre ? btw there is no bassline so give him more bass

@KoalaBlu >> jonsey-told-me >> that kick sound good, you should get high louder on the mix, the synth sequence is not that groovy, drum programming is fine
(i'm at work with headphone, so my comment on mix are not very accurate)
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@cheeky: I like the track, idk about that main synth riff though. imo something else a little bit less electro-ish might suit it better.
@agent: great tune, not sure how I feel about the panning of the vocals. also i agree with vulvavibration, you might try to use them more sparsely. other than that I really like it.
@Dr Driller: the first tune sounds like you're just messing around with the transpose knob and some levels. the second tune is not the kind of dubstep that I'm into so I can't really give you that much feedback on it. the vocal samples are cheesy as hell though, and not in a good way. kind of reminds me of dj wanka.
@LA: this sounds real good, groovy stuff. I'm looking forward to hearing the finished track.
@agent: great tune, not sure how I feel about the panning of the vocals. also i agree with vulvavibration, you might try to use them more sparsely. other than that I really like it.
@Dr Driller: the first tune sounds like you're just messing around with the transpose knob and some levels. the second tune is not the kind of dubstep that I'm into so I can't really give you that much feedback on it. the vocal samples are cheesy as hell though, and not in a good way. kind of reminds me of dj wanka.
@LA: this sounds real good, groovy stuff. I'm looking forward to hearing the finished track.
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@DrDriller: wast that the sample the Punjabi MCs used quite some time ago?
Would any of you care to comment on this one? It's still WIP but I think it might be in the right direction:
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Would any of you care to comment on this one? It's still WIP but I think it might be in the right direction:
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@bkwsk Love the synth man! whole track is really nice. imo drums could use maybe a lil bit of work, a bit too hard & straight, try loosen them up a bit.
Heres something I've been working on today, wanted to have a go at some acid sounds for a while now. Any help on the synth would be great
EDIT: finished it
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Heres something I've been working on today, wanted to have a go at some acid sounds for a while now. Any help on the synth would be great

EDIT: finished it

DiegoSapiens wrote:thats so industrial
soronery wrote:New low
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This is sickk, really feeling the synth and atmosphere.Agent 47 wrote:EDIT: finished itSoundcloud
What did you make the acid loop with?
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Thanks man glad your feelin it & i made it with lennar digital's sylenthJimmaJamJamie wrote:This is sickk, really feeling the synth and atmosphere.Agent 47 wrote:EDIT: finished itSoundcloud
What did you make the acid loop with?
DiegoSapiens wrote:thats so industrial
soronery wrote:New low
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The sharpness of the hats is great, as is the sidechained ambience. Here's a new one from me: SoundcloudAgent 47 wrote:Soundcloud
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This is sooo nice. Loving the percussion and subtle use of vocals.Tenebriated wrote:Here's a new one from me: Soundcloud
320 of this would be appreciated.
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I agree, very cool track.JimmaJamJamie wrote:This is sooo nice. Loving the percussion and subtle use of vocals.Tenebriated wrote:Here's a new one from me: Soundcloud
320 of this would be appreciated.
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