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Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Post by WastelanDUB » Wed Jul 25, 2012 3:56 pm

Any feedback would be appreciated, Thanks

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Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Post by Fat Person Torturer » Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:46 pm

The melody doesn't sound in key and sometimes clashes with the bass. There's also no flow, the song doesnt have any direction and is pretty much the same lead with varying effects. You could probably refine this and make it something good if you added some structure and other melodies.
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Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Post by RATCUB » Thu Jul 26, 2012 8:28 pm

hmmmm
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Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Post by WastelanDUB » Fri Jul 27, 2012 4:26 am

RATCUB wrote:hmmmm

Hmmmm?
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Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Post by eldoogle » Fri Jul 27, 2012 5:01 am

Yeah, probs not in key, weird.
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Re: Really need feedback on this, WastelanDUB- Raw ideas

Post by WastelanDUB » Fri Jul 27, 2012 5:34 am

Yeah I was thinking mabye thats why it feels a bit awkward.....
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