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Paul Dymond - Horse

Post by paul2801 » Tue Jul 31, 2012 1:58 pm

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Re: Paul Dymond - Horse

Post by mean iDeaL » Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:29 pm

The track as a whole is sounding pretty good with some nice melodies, however the main bass line sounds a bit underwhelming IMO - maybe try dirtying it up with a bit of distortion and having it a bit louder in the mix? Aside from that, nice work :)
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Re: Paul Dymond - Horse

Post by KillerKraut » Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:39 pm

mean iDeaL wrote:The track as a whole is sounding pretty good with some nice melodies, however the main bass line sounds a bit underwhelming IMO - maybe try dirtying it up with a bit of distortion and having it a bit louder in the mix? Aside from that, nice work :)
Its not all about the filth man.


Anyway, as for the track, I think its fine the way it is. You need to turn down the bass slightly, and in my opinion give it a more meaningful name... lol.

But nice job, just a few small revisions.
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Re: Paul Dymond - Horse

Post by mean iDeaL » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:21 am

Filth is good though :D
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