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burnz
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Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Tue Jul 31, 2012 6:20 am

Gday guy's could i please get some feedback on my latest? Its a remix of a really old song O Fortuna

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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by wub » Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:27 am

Starts off promising enough but from 20s it's just a mess of midrange bass. The sample gets lost below the synths, and the drums are lacking any real prescence to cut through the noise.
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:35 am

Yea your right, thanks for that. This song has been doing my head in :-o
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Mon Aug 06, 2012 1:39 am

cleaned it up a bit, anyone else?
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by randol35 » Mon Aug 06, 2012 2:58 am

Sounds very very messy man. Drums lack presence like stated above, and the midrange seems very harsh and kinda hard to listen to.
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Wed Aug 29, 2012 12:10 am

Ok cleaned it up more and uploaded newest version. Hope I'm getting somewhere with this track, I've defiantly learnt alot since I started it. And more straight up feedback?
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Thu Aug 30, 2012 2:07 am

Still too messy? Sounds shit? Don't worry about
offending me, It :corndance: helps me learn and drives me.
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by Justin Bays » Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:07 pm

I really like your ideas but as people above said, the mix needs a lot of work - specifically on the drums

I think you'll be a really good producer once you get the technical stuff down, you have some cool ideas
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by Electric_Head » Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:14 pm

EQ EQ EQ EQ

Scoop out space for your kick, High-hats, midrange , etc.
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Thu Aug 30, 2012 6:32 pm

Thanks mate, appriciate the advice, any chance you can you put me in the right direction to a tutorial for that?
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Fri Nov 09, 2012 4:44 am

one day ill get it.
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by wub » Fri Nov 09, 2012 8:55 am

The Production forum has some good topics on EQ. Basically think of each element of the tune as occupying a certain frequency range. If you have too many elements fighting for the same frequency, they'll clash and muddy the sound.
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Re: Please rate my remix

Post by burnz » Sun Nov 11, 2012 7:12 am

Makes sense, Thanks wub I'll have a look.
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