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[Jankey]

Jankey - Lizard (WIP) Tell us what you think.
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[Marzz]

Jankey - Lizard (WIP) Tell us what you think.
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Good but man you need to give some feedback first mate
Good track!
Intro was a bit too loud. The bass really reminds me of Jakes' stuff. Track was a bit loud in the fx Good stuff guys.
Big ups

[Kongret]

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Any advice would be much appreciated. It's a rough mix, i know that i need to spend a couple more days eqing everything to clean stuff out.

@Houston Weather
I think that your track needs more variety, same riff repeating for over a minute without much change starts to get boring imho.
0:21 needs some sort of impact since there is a build before it, i'd also add groovy breakbeat but that's just me And i'll post story structure picture once again http://terribleminds.com/ramble/wp-cont ... lyshit.jpg The first riff has more power than the second one, it's supposed to happen only when something even more powerful comes after the quiet/peaceful part. Nice acid sound in the second part btw.
@skylerrivera17
Good stuff mate, needs more mixing though.
Part before the first drop is actually more powerful than the drop itself, maybe you should add some high register stuff and add more variety overall before the vocal comes in. You have nice melody at 4:08 using it in the first drop wouldn't hurt . Second build is kinda dissonant, it's fine on it's own but it ruins the piano part somewhat. I would advise against repeating the same part at 4:36 it starts to drag imho. Overall really nice remix :3
@Living_Tragedy
Nice spoken intro, nice piano and stuff. Mids-only intro kick/snare/hihat are too loud and harsh, kick in the drop is waaaaaay too loud, it's louder than the whole mix :-O . I think that yaaa sounds are kinda boring, other drop sound are fine but the drop itself kinda lucks groove.
@Klesherdubs
Awesome atmosphere, track is a bit too long though Strange frog sound is way too loud. 1:09-1:15 is too long and i think that part which starts at around 2:10 should come after the 1:09-1:15 part.

[Aufnahmewindwuschel]

@kongret theres alot going on haha hm i cant tell how it will sound mixed but i dont feel the hard bass too much but i like lots of the other elements the bass that drops at 2 10 is better straighter maybe just keep that one,has a real game vibe to it and a bit prodigy

@houston weather i like that one nice industrial vibe dunno all you can do is mix maybe more but i like the arrangment and sounds yeaaaaaaah haha i love the acid part

@living tradigity love the mostlikely fallout vocal sample in the beginning and the fast arp shots again i am not to sure about the main bass maybe keep it sub or pick the best fitting bass stab for the vocals in terms of vibe of what the vocals want to transmit, maybe go for a really hollow shiny sound

@blenky119 love waht you have so far just raise the volume in the end and maybe add a sub following the groove or build one if possible with the samples really hypnotic vibe maybe make ashort pause and then go down down up with the vocals or sth change it up every 8 bars but really nice start

ok thats my wip an old tune that i work on again
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and if you want my first tune in the signature is a wip too i give some more feedback later

[Maxxan]

ok thats my wip an old tune that i work on again
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and if you want my first tune in the signature is a wip too i give some more feedback later

Cool sounding track man. Only listened real quick but the one thing that I noticed was that the main melody synth was a bit harsh. It had like this buzzing sound that sort of annoyed me, sounded a bit like a mosquito if you know what I mean.

If I were you I'd turn down the noise amp a bit and try to smoothen it out with some other effects (chorus, EQ:ing, maybe some reverb etc) so it doesn't sound so sharp. Other than that, really nice work man!

[mthrfnk]

@Houston Weather The intro is a bit plain imo, the kick and synth stabs sund a little boring. Also something (bass I think) sounds panned right - sort that out. Work on your variation, throw in some risers, and fallers. Otherwise the mix is sounding ok, just try and add a little more to keep it interesting.

@Kongret Intro with the vocals is quite cool. Imo the mid/bass needs a little more top end - try and frequency split the top mids/high of the bass patches and stereo widen them. The drums need bringing out for sure. This track has a good flow, nice ideas - just needs a good mixdown

@BudSpencertron Intro reminds me of Pokemon game music, until the hip hoppy drums kick in . The funk lead is nice man. The flow of this track is amazing, it's got the groove. Not really sure what to criticise, can't really find much Only one thing really, maybe try and widen the leads a little?

A quick preview of something I'm working on atm, I think I overdid the bass a little but can't really tell on my headphones, otherwise any thoughts?
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[rymebox]

@mthrfnk Sounds alright, but the snare being offset is a tad irritating. The kick could use a little more punch/high end, but I really dig the chords!
@BudSpencertron That's funky as shit! Sounds super french haha. The only thing I would really change if I had to would be the claps/snare being a little more punchy but sounds pretty sick
@Kongret I like the background synths, but I think the main bassline needs to be a little more present.

In any case, here's my WIP: Soundcloud

[dougriley]

rymebox: cool intro, but you throw it all out there right off the bat! give your listener something to look forward to... try to be a little patient with your midbass perhaps. mix is legit throughout. feelin the vocals for sure, everything works well together.

mthrfnk: been stoked on your productions for a while now. clean mix as always. i dig the intro/build, but i was a little let down at the drop. needs some more power. feel like you need to fill out the low end a good deal. structure is on point, just feel as though you can add some more body to it if that makes any sense?

budspencertron: groovy tune man! i could almost picture hearing a live electro band playing this. its really hard for me to comment on a tune like this, wish i could give you a little constructive criticism...

living_tragedy: cool intro, piano chords are enjoyable. vocals are cool, but could use some more character to really get your attention. not quite my style, but the structure is there. really fiending for a low end throughout though.

here's my latest, been feelin the 140 hip hop esque tunes lately, any criticism would be awesome!

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[Maxxan]

Hah, that's a good one mthrfnk! Whole thing sounds great, but +1 on the offset snare thing. Also, since you're playing the same melody throughout the whole intro it feels as though you need some more energy when it drops. I think the kick sounds good, it's meant to be more of a housy kick anyway so I don't really agree on it being weak. Maybe, and this is a cheap trick but w/e, just add some sidechained white noise when it drops? Works wonders for adding energy quickly, even though it's way overused. I also like to have my hi-hats a bit more present in that kind of music as well and then mix up the patterns a bit but that's just my style.

[RandoRando]

@houston i like the buildup, this song sounds like a tribe of indians in africa creating scientific weapons and killing aliens with them! love the cool melody and weird sounds!

@kongret i think could use some more dynamics, the whole track in general is lacking dynamics. I like the drums though, they go really well with the tune and all its awesome meldoys!

@bud i love the glcoeknspiel rhode sound! and that saw is awesome, did you make all of these meldoys? they are great! you always bring the fire!

@mthrfnk great meldoys i think the kick is a little too punchy! the synths are well put together and that drums have good rhytm! A+

heres a weird tune i been working on, turn ya speakaz up becuase i like to preserve dynamics so the track isnt LOUD.

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[travis_baker]

randorando: sounding great, not a fan of the many kicks although it does work in this tune. the mix is tight. cant really say much about it other than well done. and i like it haha

dougrily: intro is sounding good, the drop is just crazy mate really nice tune. love the sub after the midrange hits. drums are great aswell really tight and punchy. im not really at ur level to make any crtisism. amazing stuff.

rmbx: nice work mate the mids seem really loud, the general structure is nice mate the intro and all. its osunding good. everything is really punchy and big. nice work

new tune, not really finished but almost their, thanks all
http://soundcloud.com/travisb9/ragny-hag

[CrewCutz]

@Houston Weather
I think it need a bit more bro sounds a bit empty big work tho keep up the good stuff

@skylerrivera17
Good stuff mate, needs more mixing though.

@Living_Tragedy
Love the piano good stuff keep up the good work


New grime/Dubstep instrumental any feedback would be much appreciated

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MUCH LOVVEEE

[RARRR_]

Randorando - I like the vocal samples in the breakdown lots...some of the highs stick out a bit for me but im sure you will clean it up with some eq later not sure what else to say lol it is pretty different:P


dougriley - Really nice, i like it alot! (especially that catchy little hook that comes in at about 43 seconds). I did find the bass in the intro a bit annoying though but apart from that its really good


mthrfnk - Not really my type of music but none the less the bass sounds fine. The kick stood out though... probably needs some more high end and less thud from the deeper low end


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Started this a couple of hours ago, i havent processed or put fx on anything yet
i guess im just wandering if the people like the initial bass sounds and rhythm

[Aufnahmewindwuschel]

@rarrr feel the slug metallic bass, maybe add another layer on top off the snare maybe a bit more reverb on the bass hm, maybe triblets at some point like wobobob yai or halftime like woooooooob yai

@CrewCuts nice clean mix, hm maybe bring the main bass a bit more in the front hm yeah only maybe switch up a bit here and tehre and the main bass a bit more in the middle or more highs or sth

@travis always love your stuff and you are a beat making machine haha hm ok feedback hm structure wise its done it rolls no boring spots the sub is banging so you dont have much space to make it louder maybe try to like bring the drums abit more upfront only the maindrums like main snare and maybe a tiny bassdrum layered on top and waht i like to do is make some busses with a long reverb and a long dubdelay but both much highend so the sound floats over the whole mix at points

@randorando i like how the bass rolls maybe go for some blacknotes to add some grime like with a slide effect hm the hi hats are a bit loud but i think iwht some mixing and changes it will be a nice "genreless" tune

@dougriley really nice flow and mix hm dont know about the bow rap sample maybe pitch down and longer?
but besides that its only about making it longer now

@rymebox really hard to comment for me its not really my cup of tea hm maybe try to remain some dynamics but i know that it works for many listeners

@mthrfnk feel the build up hm maybe just bring the snare more in the front? but i like the vibe of that hm yeah maybe just some more power overall

worked a bit more on it
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[Italus]

@Houston Weather Needs more sounds to fill it up.

@RandoRando Too much high end, not enough bass.

@Maxxan Also needs more bass, and more ambient backrounding sounds.

@dougriley Very nice. Smooth and clean, not really my style though.

@rymebox That's amazing, love it. The kick needs a little more weight in the sub area though.

Alright so I've been working on this track for a few weeks now the last step is mastering, but before I do that I need feedback. I want to know what you guys think or what could use working on before I release it. Any song name suggestions would be great! And yes I have it on youtube because I can do the private link only thing. Oh and btw it's mixed a little low so pump it up.

[tripwire22]

@italus this track sounds fine. A bit unoriginal but sounds great overall. Though i though this was the dubstep forums not electro house or w.e

@BudSpencertron Lovin that like guitar sound lead. Really unique sounds in your tune.

@RARRR_ : I know you said you only worked an hour so i cant say too much. But it obviously needs work especially making the drums more interesting and doing more with that bassline. that Patch is alright though

@travis baker yeah man this one is really cool and heavy i def dig it

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My song isnt that great or very well mixdown i just wanted some opinions really

[jclarkeiv]

@BudSpencertron : I really like the grove and the trippy bass is great, reminds me of a lot of the psychedelic stuff I listen too. Mix sounds pretty spot on on my shiny new krk rokit 8s
@Rarr_ : Interesting idea for an intro, are you working with audio loops? There seems to be a weird cut off when the drums stop and the vocal sample triggers. Probably just an effect of only working on it for a few hours.
@tripwire22 : I like the atmosphere you have going on, almost has a spooky kind of vibe going on, im interested to hear more.


Here is a 90bpm track I just started. Any kind of feedback would be greatly appreciated, maybe even advice as too what to do next with it. I'm considering bringing in more instruments and possibly some live guitar.

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edit: its not just an intro anymore so I deleted some of the original post

[billybuxton]

@rymebox
Really enjoyed listening to this man,
Most dubstep bores me now but it kept my interest throughout.

It would be nice to hear it with a chunkier kick poking through the mix, but good work...

Keep it up

[travis_baker]

jclarkiv: uh this is sick man. wtf. heaps of panning is i little off putting at times although it is a wired style... so i cant complain. mix is tight nice work.

trip wire 22: the hats at the start are sounding great mate really clean sounding and have a nice groove to them. the drop is really unexpected. the sub sounds nice with the kick maybe a little more punch. the snare in my opinion needs a bit more presence maybe boost the lows on it. it seems al a bit muddy around the lowe rfrequencies like 100 to 600. although u have done a good job of filling up all the space but still making it sound minimalistic and deep. nice one i like it

atulas: not keen on this sort of music sorry if my feedback is useless, mix is ok and the intro and drop works well. nice one hope it all goes well for u mate.

dubspencertron: i love the sound of the synth at the start, to me th mix is really nice mate pleasure to listen to, really. i like how u use foley in ur tune, kinda nic jaar styles. all the melodys are all interesting enough to leave it as it is. nice tune

RAAR: the kick snare is a little bland mate, try add some more character in your drums. its a key feature in dubstep and needs to be interesting. i like the bass noises man aand id defs throw some shapes to this. all u need is to add a few risers here and there some fills and boom tune done get signed get massive. nice job mate! ur on the right track just needs more layereing on ur drums and a few bits and bops for ear candy.

i may have posted here too often lately, just started this tune. not really sure about it. thanks everyone for the feedback
http://soundcloud.com/travisb9/sarmen-clipp

[JTreeZY]

Not sure the direction I wanna go with this one. Keep it Hip Hoppy or make it Dubsteppier.. any recommendations?
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