Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

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aleksander9
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Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Post by aleksander9 » Thu Aug 23, 2012 11:25 am

In this song i have experimented with making melodies that fit together. It Starts Jazzy with the piano and bass theme and evolves into the main melody. At the end i use all the melodies i have created together.

Hope you enjoy, feedback is greatly appreciated

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Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Post by chazzzza » Fri Aug 24, 2012 3:15 pm

it seems a little bare to be honest but the melody are good, just not good enough on their own.

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Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Post by oprs » Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:53 pm

is that the brittany spears piano in the beginning?

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Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Post by Aurokh » Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:08 pm

Worryingly I listned through the whole Britney Spears song lol. As for the track aleksandr, I think you have a good base with the melodies, they're interplaying well. I personally would look at beefing up the percussion a bit, more presence on the snare maybe and general eq? Just my 2 cents :)

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Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (electronica,Chillout)

Post by clayrocks » Fri Aug 24, 2012 7:14 pm

oprs wrote:is that the brittany spears piano in the beginning?

:lol:
I like the song man but i think the piano notes could be altered to make it sound more 'natural' Put a little more variation in :)

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Re: Aleksander9 - Walking forward (elTectronica,Chillout)

Post by aleksander9 » Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:06 am

Thanks for the feedback! Its sometimes hard to see some obvious things after i have worked alot. Will Beef it up with more progressive drums and humanize the piano part.

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