Zangola - Funk Right Off

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Zangola
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Zangola - Funk Right Off

Post by Zangola » Tue Sep 04, 2012 5:48 pm

Feedback on my Funk/Dubstep track would be great!

Thank you, Zangola

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Re: Zangola - Funk Right Off

Post by alicant » Tue Sep 04, 2012 6:34 pm

Total honest opinion...

I really did not like this. The synth hook is too "in ya face" and pokes me in the eye like an annoying brother. The melodies do not develop enough and the bass wobble clashes with the melodies too much. The fill ins have no real human velocity... it sounds like it's been made on a computer too much. All in all to me it sounds like a fairground ride nightmare.

My advice would be to scrap this tune... start a new one.

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Re: Zangola - Funk Right Off

Post by Bassf4ce » Wed Sep 05, 2012 8:09 am

I think a bit of a better mix down between all of the synths would make this track pretty nice an interesting.
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Re: Zangola - Funk Right Off

Post by ZECH » Thu Sep 06, 2012 6:44 pm

Sounds like video game music. Sorry man. I agree with alicant. Keep trying man!!!

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