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dowee - lost - feedback pls!!

Post by djdowee » Tue Jul 10, 2007 12:05 pm

would be much appreciated....started this a couple weeks ago, bit stuck as to where to take it!

audio > www.djdowee.com > track titled 'lost'

thanks
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Post by cure » Tue Jul 10, 2007 2:42 pm

Im not 100 percent sure of this (listening to this on comp speakers at work) but I think you need SUBS!!!! Sounds pretty cool so far...Its missing something though ;) Sorry if Im not much help lol
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Post by krio » Tue Jul 10, 2007 4:27 pm

yeah feels like a demo, somehow...

not bad though...02:2x something was going pretty good..
Oh and cure, the beats make a nice sub, not a massive one though...

All in all, nice progressive tune :)

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Post by djdowee » Thu Jul 12, 2007 2:26 pm

cheers bro! taken on board...

anyone else check it?

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Post by horse » Thu Jul 12, 2007 2:38 pm

theres definitely sub in there!

your percussion is real nice, im liking that.
this track has a good steady rolling vibe - sort of a calm before the storm head nodder pace

i will say that it all seems a bit muddy and flat. i think you need to give eveything its on space.
but keep at it - cuz its taking shape for sure
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Post by djdowee » Fri Jul 13, 2007 9:36 am

yo, yeah theres an 808 in there that i played about with a little bit

by giving everything space do you mean to slow down the progression throughout the tune? bit confused! i havnt eq'd any of the channels yet so hopefully once ive done that it should make it sound tighter.

glad your feeling it, big up!

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Post by horse » Fri Jul 13, 2007 9:41 am

just meant that cuz it all sounded a bit muddy and flat that it needed cleaning up, make everything a bit more crystal.
but if you havent eq'd anything then thats probly why :)
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Post by djdowee » Tue Jul 17, 2007 11:14 am

any one else give it a go? :lol:

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Post by djdowee » Tue Jul 24, 2007 2:39 pm

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