SERmusic - Charlie's Cat (deep)

[skylerrivera17]

My first go at the deep stuff I like my music melodic so theres a ton of that in there! I feel the mixdown is good and the mastering is a preset. It was a rather simple song with a only a few tracks. The percussion I created myself and I feel that it is pretty darn good! Comments/critique MUCH appreciated! Thanks for the listen!
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[chrondor]

I like all of it but I feel the arpeggiator adds nothing feel-wise. maybe jam out on it and try to flush out a few more ideas from this one. I get the same feel I get from Skream's Emotionally Mute. Also, I don't know what feel you're going for personally, but I would try to set the image of the song to be more bass focused, possibly in the master EQ, or even just by turning all the trebly sounds down a little bit so that bass can really kick.

[skylerrivera17]

Thanks for the critique! I value it a lot! I definitely agree I could flush it out a lot more but, I hadn't made a track in awhile and it was one of those deals where I really just wanted to make something and release it!

[nitz]

I'm feeling it, especially the piano melody. I did like the arp that creeped up; quite a interesting sound. But i think it sat too back in the mix and could have done with some progression.