Hey you! Check my shit out! I need feedback!

[CodeMath]

Im a new producer(2 months in the game, 4 years as a DJ) and would really enjoy some good feedback from knowledgeable people. Here are both of my originals(unmastered)

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[baseband]

maybe internter forums rwong place to ask for the type of advice and maybe goto the dotctor to check itout and

[CodeMath]

Bump, looking for actual feedback.

[pattycake]

Bit repetitive get some more variation in there, some good ideas in there not a fan of all the timbre choices but some are good. drums sound downed out.

[CodeMath]

Bit repetitive get some more variation in there, some good ideas in there not a fan of all the timbre choices but some are good. drums sound downed out.

Yeah neither track is really mixed or mastered at the moment im still learning how to do all that(if anyone has any good resources hook it up!). I've only recently started understanding gain structure.

Thanks a lot for the feedback!

Which track did you think got repetitive? Or was it both?

[stuntsbyme]

Feedback as a listener, I don't mix (yet).. on the first one: Intro was great... I think it got a little lost in the middle, didn't quite flow like I think you wanted it to. Also, like pattycake said, a little too much repetition. Overall though.. I think it has tons of potential..

[CodeMath]

Which track were you talking about stuntsbyme? Appreciate the feedback so much!!

Bump for more feedback please! Working on another tune. I'd really like some comments on what needs to be cleaned up/mixed better also.

[stuntsbyme]

No prob man.. I think at 1:20, You need to change it up there.. From that point on, it becomes really repetitive. Maybe pick up the tempo there instead of later and then make it heavy, nasty, dirty. Really poor out the rage in it then end it somewhat like the beginning. I really like the beginning. Hope this helps and I can't wait to hear what you do with it.

[CodeMath]

Im actually sending the track over to my buddy who is a drummer, he'll be doing a live drum refix for it and I may change up some things once he does that before reuploading it, maybe as a VIP or I might just delete the old one and replace it with this.