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TheRisingPeople
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The Rising People - Confused Sense

Post by TheRisingPeople » Sat Sep 29, 2012 10:34 am



our second masterpiece, i was hoping you could tell us what to improve.
thnx!

Greetz TRP

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Re: The Rising People - Confused Sense

Post by wub » Mon Oct 01, 2012 8:57 am

The kick/snare are very quiet and weak in the mix, sound very flat as a result. The bass sound you've got is droney and repetitive, and the whole is actually quite boring, like it needs a hook or something to give it some focus?

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Re: The Rising People - Confused Sense

Post by koncide » Mon Oct 01, 2012 9:04 am

TheRisingPeople wrote:

our second masterpiece, i was hoping you could tell us what to improve.
thnx!

Greetz TRP
Work on those beats! Where's the punch at? Also, I'd use more than just a sawtooth wave for a bass, it's been rinsed to death. People are just going to switch off straight away when they hear that.
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Re: The Rising People - Confused Sense

Post by spunkfacesamplers » Mon Oct 01, 2012 9:16 am

the beats are really weak and the sounds are very clean. They need some baws.

Try adding a overdrive aux to send stuff to.

For the drums you need some bass and sub in the kick, its all click/top end and the snare needs really bite and body. Try layering in a snare with some 200-400hz like a tight 909 snare.

also i feel the bass needs some modulation to help keep interest.

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