sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

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sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

Post by dickman69 » Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:19 am

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was wondering how this is coming along
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Re: sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

Post by Alan X » Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:13 am

I like the feeling of this song, and I'm not techno expert either. I feel like you could expand on the lead for a nice breakdown section. I also feel like it could use a section with hats and/or percussion going kind of crazy like the peak of the song, and maybe bring out the clap more to add contrast between that and the background-ish drums. Sounds good for 2 min of audio tho. Re-post or PM me when u finish this plz!
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Re: sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

Post by dickman69 » Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:21 pm

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Post by Electric_Head » Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:23 pm

I'll check this out later.
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Re: sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

Post by dickman69 » Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:47 pm

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Re: sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

Post by ericgasparro » Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:34 am

this is pretty nice, little bit more percussion work in the back ground to fill the space would be nice. but very faint. overall feel of the track is tight. maybe a punchier kick?
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Re: sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

Post by dickman69 » Tue Oct 02, 2012 6:59 pm

thanks man ill work on that kick
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Re: sitReaLM - ??? [Techno] WIP

Post by Jizz » Tue Oct 02, 2012 7:23 pm

ooh, nice and ark, feeling this; I'd agree that the kick needs a bit mroe work, but more just something to fill out the atmosphere will be quite nice too, maybe mixing this up on a more stereo level... if that makes sense lol
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