Descent-Dawn (Ambient/Minimal)

goochrock13 · Post by **goochrock13** » Fri Oct 19, 2012 8:49 am

Hi-would really appreciate some honest feedback on this. Thanks in advance!

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goochrock13 · Post by **goochrock13** » Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:45 pm

anyone have a listen for me?!

wub · Post by **wub** » Tue Oct 23, 2012 6:38 am

Felt the intro was a bit longer than it needed to be, percussion takes it's time building up a bit too much. Piano is floating nicely on everything. Some great percussion glitch sounds in there to compliment things, one of them sounds like it's being a bit overused, the needle scratch style noise with the mild reverb on it? Could do with toning down.

Same for the break at 3m20s, goes on maybe twice as long as it needs to do, like the tune doesn't feel like it's progressing at the speed that it should be.

goochrock13 · Post by **goochrock13** » Tue Oct 23, 2012 9:42 am

nice thanks for the feedback mate. I have shortened the break and intro now as a few people mentioned that. Which reverb did u mean when u say the needle scratch? If you need any feedback yourself I'll happily oblige, cheers

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