Dramatic romance -hold you close (melodic dnb)

[mindsetAUS]

Hi, new one from us. Feedback appreciated.free dl too.

Thanks


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[wub]

Felt the intro was a bit long without the beats. Some of the bass patches are overpowering the vocals in places. Beat itself is a bit on the weak side, kick and snare are lacking a lot of intensity and the midrange growling seems to be driving the tune more.

Composition is nice, there are some good sounds in here, but think the beat itself is lacking in the mixdown. Good stuff though, lot of potential here

[mindsetAUS]

Felt the intro was a bit long without the beats. Some of the bass patches are overpowering the vocals in places. Beat itself is a bit on the weak side, kick and snare are lacking a lot of intensity and the midrange growling seems to be driving the tune more.

Composition is nice, there are some good sounds in here, but think the beat itself is lacking in the mixdown. Good stuff though, lot of potential here

Thanks, great constructive criticism . I didn't realize the beats were weak until u pointed it out and now it's clear, I need to mix my drums louder..

Vocals are just so Hard to get right, I kinda gave up trying to fix them when the vocal recording was noisy and badly sung (by me)