New minimal tech-house-esque Guano track (320) - Chapletown

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New minimal tech-house-esque Guano track (320) - Chapletown

Post by al_the_man1 » Wed Aug 01, 2007 12:10 am

Thought a mild change in direction was in order! No more party dubstep... well, for a while atleast. This one is much more like progressive house or minimal techno. Tell me what you think PLEASE!
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There must be a few tech fans out there... surely!
I must warn you also, the beat is quite easy to lose, ESPECIALLY before the 2nd drop. If you can, listen to it very loud, and maybe with a bit of a smoke too. In a darkened room. (Like all dubstep, really)
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Guano

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Post by knowone » Wed Aug 01, 2007 4:00 am

nice! i like this. good breakdown with the build. production and sound quality is great. my only advice is that the reggae organ gets a little monotonous, maybe a little sweeping on that. also not too big on the fadeout at the end.. maybe a proper ending? great tune.

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Post by struggle » Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:27 am

feeling it. i would mess around with different organ sounds..maybe some layers. i like where it's at though.

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Post by horse » Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:13 am

that bleeping organ sound thruout is really grating
its like i couldnt hear the track properly because my ears kept focussing in on that noise
i would probly take that out and make more of the tune underneath. really get that techno/ambient/dubstep vibe building.

everything about this tune i like - im really feeling that techno/dub crossover thing at the minute - but that bleepy thing is bringing down a good tune.

the breakdown from 03.20 to 04.44 is fucking awesome

sorry if all that sounded harsh :)
but i reckon you got a really fucking good tune here and i feel strongly that its being let down
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Post by al_the_man1 » Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:22 am

Thanks to all for very helpful and constructive criticisms!
"that bleeping organ sound thruout is really grating" - I'll try take it down a notch/get rid of it. After the intro?
"my only advice is that the reggae organ gets a little monotonous, maybe a little sweeping on that. also not too big on the fadeout at the end.. maybe a proper ending?"
You're right, a proper ending would work.

I'll be tweaking later this week with your comments in mind, people. Can't have 3 people complaining about an organ sound!
Once again, thank you very much.

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Post by dynamixuk » Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:24 am

on the ~DL now



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Post by horse » Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:30 am

al_the_man1 wrote:"that bleeping organ sound thruout is really grating" - I'll try take it down a notch/get rid of it. After the intro?
i reckon thatd do it
i think just cuz its so prominent and high pitched its hard to hear it as part of a whole and it seems to seperate itself out you know?
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Post by dynamixuk » Wed Aug 01, 2007 9:32 am

I really like this. If i dont get a "re vamped" version by the tenth im still gonna play it.




Beautiful chord structure.
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Post by cure » Wed Aug 01, 2007 1:12 pm

Nice one..on the DL.
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Post by al_the_man1 » Wed Aug 01, 2007 5:28 pm

"i think just cuz its so prominent and high pitched its hard to hear it as part of a whole and it seems to seperate itself out you know?"
I can understand that. It would be nice if you were able to pop round and listen to every tune I write, and give your input, as it is helpful and informative. It's very difficult to listen impartially to songs of your own making.
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"If i dont get a "re vamped" version by the tenth im still gonna play it."
I hope this isn't the 10th reply!

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Re: New minimal tech-house-esque Guano track (320) - Chaplet

Post by gravious » Thu Aug 02, 2007 10:51 am

This is really good, the production is strong, and I like the styles in the tune.

Nice one!

I agree somewhat with the comments re the high-pitched organ bleep thing, but I like the idea. Perhaps if you had it drop in and out a bit more, or had effects (even just dubby delay/reverb) coming in and out on - it to change the texture of it.

Really good regardless

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Post by dynamixuk » Thu Aug 02, 2007 10:55 am

al_the_man1 wrote:"i think just cuz its so prominent and high pitched its hard to hear it as part of a whole and it seems to seperate itself out you know?"
I can understand that. It would be nice if you were able to pop round and listen to every tune I write, and give your input, as it is helpful and informative. It's very difficult to listen impartially to songs of your own making.
horse is boss

"If i dont get a "re vamped" version by the tenth im still gonna play it."
I hope this isn't the 10th reply!
it needs to drop out to just bass and beats some point, perhaps with the "anoying" organ behind filterd right down to sound like a bell or shome shit with fuk loads of delay on....


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Post by oyaarss » Thu Aug 02, 2007 1:54 pm

yeah, i like this one.

too bad the reverberized snares are mono. kinda lacks the d-step's spacey mood.

in other words - MORE STEREO FXes

anyways, the tune is great!
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Post by AFL » Fri Aug 03, 2007 12:51 am

I love this tune man. I don't even mind the "annoying" beepy sound. I see where people are coming from with it, as it does persist for most of the track, but I like the melody it plays. Like a few people said, maybe just come fx or something. If theres a revamp I'll dl for sure, but it's a strong well produced tune for sure. Always diggin the Guano styles.

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