SureFire - Machines and Monsters Pt.2 (Metal influenced)

[Sure_Fire]

Ok so this track is the latter half of the two-part epic track that will be central to the EP I'm putting together. Many of the themes from this song are reccuring themes from Part 1, which is still being structured, so I thought I'd upload this one for feedback in the meantime. Don't be afraid to go all out of criticism, this track is very raw and needs to be filled in plenty. The ending will be fairly epic sounding, I'm in the process of composing that atm.

It's very Proggressive metal influenced, so keep that in mind when giving feedback. and it will have more.....stuff. Also the track in my sig will segue into this one. Enjoy!

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[Sure_Fire]

srsly guys like 4 views? poor effort dsf.

[timbaah]

Big tune man! The melody starting @ 0.28 sounds a bit strange to me, like it doesn't fit in, but could be just taste.. I can hear the difference in your track and mine by the layering you did.. Sounds nice and full.. Drums are great, lot of variation! Second part after the drop isn't much different that the first part in my opinion, something that's missing in my track too, but you probably still need to fix this? Curious what the ending will sound like... Anyway, great track!

[Sure_Fire]

I've worked on the bit at 0:28 so it fits a bit better, it was kind of bare then so I put some extra synthy stuff and effects there to fill it out. Also there's not really that much layering going on, just decent synthesis with a shitload of distortion and fattening plugins (camelphat etc.). I'm gonna work on that second verse a bit and change it up a bit.