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mindsetAUS
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by mindsetAUS » Sat Nov 10, 2012 2:15 pm
hi folks, we are back into making tunes around 140 bpm.
this one is a work in progress, which may never get finished as we have 3 or 4 other works in the pipeline.....
feedback appreciated
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dickman69
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by dickman69 » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:32 pm
dont like the kick
snare sounds like it needs layered, or use another snare for the accidentals
square synth sounds good
purple/gfunk bit at 1:30 sounds fantastic
wish you'd bring that intro piano back in w/ the square synth
first few measures sound a little weak, develops nicely once that synth comes in tho, nice
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mindsetAUS
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by mindsetAUS » Sun Nov 11, 2012 1:35 am
rayman612 wrote:dont like the kick
snare sounds like it needs layered, or use another snare for the accidentals
square synth sounds good
purple/gfunk bit at 1:30 sounds fantastic
wish you'd bring that intro piano back in w/ the square synth
first few measures sound a little weak, develops nicely once that synth comes in tho, nice
Yeh the drums need work badly don't they! Will get onto it! It's funny how i couldn't spot that last night but now that u pointed it out its so obvious
Cheers for the feedback

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Tordal
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by Tordal » Sun Nov 11, 2012 3:22 pm
melody-wise really, really good, congrats! i also would like to see that piano sample brought back into the song like stated above, it's too nice to just use it as an intro, and maybe just a little bit of reverb on that piano not that much...just a tad?
other than that, great song!
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