Dramatic Romance - The Wayfarer (melodic dubstep)

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mindsetAUS
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Dramatic Romance - The Wayfarer (melodic dubstep)

Post by mindsetAUS » Sat Nov 10, 2012 2:15 pm

hi folks, we are back into making tunes around 140 bpm.

this one is a work in progress, which may never get finished as we have 3 or 4 other works in the pipeline.....

feedback appreciated

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Re: Dramatic Romance - The Wayfarer (melodic dubstep)

Post by dickman69 » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:32 pm

dont like the kick
snare sounds like it needs layered, or use another snare for the accidentals
square synth sounds good
purple/gfunk bit at 1:30 sounds fantastic
wish you'd bring that intro piano back in w/ the square synth

first few measures sound a little weak, develops nicely once that synth comes in tho, nice
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Re: Dramatic Romance - The Wayfarer (melodic dubstep)

Post by mindsetAUS » Sun Nov 11, 2012 1:35 am

rayman612 wrote:dont like the kick
snare sounds like it needs layered, or use another snare for the accidentals
square synth sounds good
purple/gfunk bit at 1:30 sounds fantastic
wish you'd bring that intro piano back in w/ the square synth

first few measures sound a little weak, develops nicely once that synth comes in tho, nice

Yeh the drums need work badly don't they! Will get onto it! It's funny how i couldn't spot that last night but now that u pointed it out its so obvious

Cheers for the feedback :)

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Re: Dramatic Romance - The Wayfarer (melodic dubstep)

Post by Tordal » Sun Nov 11, 2012 3:22 pm

melody-wise really, really good, congrats! i also would like to see that piano sample brought back into the song like stated above, it's too nice to just use it as an intro, and maybe just a little bit of reverb on that piano not that much...just a tad?

other than that, great song!
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