MOWY WOWY - JUST SICK (FEEDBACK PLEASE)

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MOWY WOWY - JUST SICK (FEEDBACK PLEASE)

Post by MowyWowy » Sat Nov 10, 2012 10:02 pm

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Post by MowyWowy » Mon Nov 12, 2012 2:41 am

anything?
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Re: MOWY WOWY - JUST SICK (FEEDBACK PLEASE)

Post by Loyset » Mon Nov 12, 2012 4:49 am

It feels a little empty, not sure about the interrupted bass.
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Post by IconicCAN » Mon Nov 12, 2012 6:51 am

Need some gnarly lead sounds in there! I'm in love with your bass tone though!
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Post by MowyWowy » Mon Nov 12, 2012 5:49 pm

Thanks for the feedback:)
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Post by MowyWowy » Tue Nov 13, 2012 6:23 am

more?
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Post by MowyWowy » Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:03 am

nothing else?
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Re: MOWY WOWY - JUST SICK (FEEDBACK PLEASE)

Post by Rappone » Thu Nov 15, 2012 6:12 am

A couple of things are off about this. One, even though the notes work, the wobble is too reptitive. Try playing with the pitch, mucking it up a bit, throw in some overdrive, make it scream, jump with it. The bleeps that hop in later are , well, to put it bluntly, bad. Not a good choice of instrument with what u had going on. The intro is too long, too. Some constructive feedback, I guess. Also, I agree with the fact you need some more UMPH in the track, some more sickness. some WOWing throbs. The kicks not bad, the drums need to slap harder. Keep em coming!
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