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Nexoid
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by Nexoid » Mon Dec 03, 2012 6:51 am
Just another mixdown of my track Utopia with a few vocal samples. Still not complete
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stuntsbyme
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by stuntsbyme » Mon Dec 03, 2012 6:57 am
Holy shit dude! Utopia has put a smile on my face... NICE! Just one suggestion (little one) if you want it.. the female voice in the very beginning - bring it up a little so it balances with the music when it starts out.. Other than that, sweeeeeeeetttt...
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Nexoid
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by Nexoid » Mon Dec 03, 2012 7:11 am
stuntsbyme wrote:Holy shit dude! Utopia has put a smile on my face... NICE! Just one suggestion (little one) if you want it.. the female voice in the very beginning - bring it up a little so it balances with the music when it starts out.. Other than that, sweeeeeeeetttt...
Im glad you liked it man!

and thanks, Ill sort the levels out

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koncide
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by koncide » Mon Dec 03, 2012 8:29 am
Good mixdown mate, only thing I could say is that the kick and snare don't smack as much as I'd like them to. Maybe bring them forward a bit more?
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Nexoid
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by Nexoid » Mon Dec 03, 2012 6:25 pm
koncide wrote:Good mixdown mate, only thing I could say is that the kick and snare don't smack as much as I'd like them to. Maybe bring them forward a bit more?
Thanks for the advice man!

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Rappone
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by Rappone » Mon Dec 03, 2012 6:40 pm
Killer arrangement! What I love about this is the dancefloor potential it has. This could easily be a track heard in an EDM rave, but for a couple of reasons it isn't.
1. you could definitely use a sub to make the kick hit harder
2. the quality on the growl is kinda low, maybe playing a little with the noise effect/oscillators keeps it more growly from static
3. same with the pitchbending synth
4. The drums [kick n snare] should be more pronounced, try adding a filter and compressor maybe?
Those three points are whats keeping it, in my O, from being an industry track. Notation is catchy and really jumpy. Well done, I love it!
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Nexoid
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by Nexoid » Mon Dec 03, 2012 6:54 pm
Rappone wrote:Killer arrangement! What I love about this is the dancefloor potential it has. This could easily be a track heard in an EDM rave, but for a couple of reasons it isn't.
1. you could definitely use a sub to make the kick hit harder
2. the quality on the growl is kinda low, maybe playing a little with the noise effect/oscillators keeps it more growly from static
3. same with the pitchbending synth
4. The drums [kick n snare] should be more pronounced, try adding a filter and compressor maybe?
Those three points are whats keeping it, in my O, from being an industry track. Notation is catchy and really jumpy. Well done, I love it!
Im glad you liked it!

I have only been making EDM for around 5 months now so I still have a lot to learn yet, But I guess that's part of the fun

Thank you so much for the tips, I will definetly keep them in mind and use them

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