Watashiwaxogisan - The Maze (Dark/Dungeon/deathstep)

[xogi]

This is my first attempt at a Dnb track.
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[SUBFLEX]

good sounds overall, but seems like it just needs some space and breathing room ya kno?

maybe some breaks in there and filter sweeps or something to break up the main parts

and that weird moan thing before the drop... id lose that haha

[xogi]

Hey, thanks for listening man. I do get what you mean by giving it some breathing space. I'll work on that. I just wanted to track to keep hitting hard and now it's just hard to spot the changes in bass etc. So nice suggestion.
The weird moan. lol Okay, it will go too.

[koncide]

This isn't my definition of Dungeon lol, but I won't argue genres with you.

Kick and snare are FAR too quiet, get em punchier