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Strain - New Dark Tune

Post by X-Zero » Tue Aug 07, 2007 9:23 pm

Hello,
Almost finished this, any feedback would be great.
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Post by horse » Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:26 am

absolutely blinding track!

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gotta get at me with a 320 of this
awesome work

do not sleep on this
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Post by X-Zero » Wed Aug 08, 2007 1:17 pm

Nice one man.
Enjoy the 320!
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Post by diss04 » Wed Aug 08, 2007 1:19 pm

can i get a 320 aswell please? :D
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Post by promo » Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:10 pm

Yes yes dude love those starter chords .... very nice & deep. Those chords are definitely up my street and the beat tis very groovesome.

I think you could possible have done a bit of time stretching, bit crushing, phaser and other fx on the beat at points but that's optional.

Like the development with that deep hoover bass action.

Does take a while to return to the initial chords which is a shame but I like where its at nevertheless. You could probably add a 3rd melody or something but yeah overall really really like this one. If you could give it more time through out with those chords that'd be good and say cut out some repetition then it'd be getting near perfection. Overall really dig this though and would like a 320 most definitely. 8)
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Post by dayquill » Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:38 pm

Oh My Lawd!

Another Story track from the X-zero
this is fucking killllleerrr

I dont think ive ever heard anyone use samples as long as you do and do it near as well, and i LOVE how they extend to the 2nd break

I must have a 320 of this one!! /beg
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Post by drum syndicate » Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:54 pm

I really dig the overall vibe of this tune. I like the bline switch in the 2nd drop. doesn't come too soon, but establishes a great amount of progression into the tune. overall this is huge :D: 320 me plz!
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Post by serialkill » Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:56 pm

just leave a YES!!


...no more words- BIG TUNE- def!
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Post by press » Wed Aug 08, 2007 4:14 pm

:o damn this is sick ! i love the like phasing fluttering sound it adds crazy vibe. defintly hit me with a 320 please!
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Post by X-Zero » Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:22 pm

Promo wrote:Yes yes dude love those starter chords .... very nice & deep. Those chords are definitely up my street and the beat tis very groovesome.

I think you could possible have done a bit of time stretching, bit crushing, phaser and other fx on the beat at points but that's optional.

Like the development with that deep hoover bass action.

Does take a while to return to the initial chords which is a shame but I like where its at nevertheless. You could probably add a 3rd melody or something but yeah overall really really like this one. If you could give it more time through out with those chords that'd be good and say cut out some repetition then it'd be getting near perfection. Overall really dig this though and would like a 320 most definitely. 8)
Appreciate the feedback man. I'm gonna try to improve the arrangement, it does bore me a bit now the buzz has worn off.
dayquill wrote:Oh My Lawd!

Another Story track from the X-zero
this is fucking killllleerrr

I dont think ive ever heard anyone use samples as long as you do and do it near as well, and i LOVE how they extend to the 2nd break

I must have a 320 of this one!! /beg
Big ups.
drum syndicate wrote:I really dig the overall vibe of this tune. I like the bline switch in the 2nd drop. doesn't come too soon, but establishes a great amount of progression into the tune. overall this is huge :D: 320 me plz!
Cheers man.
serialkill wrote:just leave a YES!!


...no more words- BIG TUNE- def!
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Press wrote::o damn this is sick ! i love the like phasing fluttering sound it adds crazy vibe. defintly hit me with a 320 please!
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Post by djrobyn » Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:32 pm

would love to have a 320 of this!
sick sick stuff, as always! :5:
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