check my dub step tune

grim · Post by **grim** » Sat Apr 01, 2006 7:14 pm

http://www.dubstepforum.com/tunes/retaliation.mp3

hi ive just started making dubstep after making dnb for a couple of years. tell me wot u think of this chune ive started.

grim

auralassassin · Post by **auralassassin** » Sat Apr 01, 2006 7:29 pm

I tell ya... I am kinda feelin the electro style cowbell action.

whatever that spacey sound is kinda gets annoying after the beat initially drops... maybe even before then. focus on what you got there, and remove that tripped out sound.

in fact, you can eliminate that entire first 45 seconds... start it with that vocal sample. that spacey pad noise really gave me a headache--no joke.

once it drops, I feel the serious bass pressure... really starts to pick up right about the end of this track. in my opinion, the first 45 is the worst, the last 45 is the best... I'd build on the last half... the space ship shit has to go though man

grim · Post by **grim** » Sun Apr 02, 2006 2:33 pm

do u mean the arpegiated synthy thing or that like swooping down noise

auralassassin · Post by **auralassassin** » Sun Apr 02, 2006 2:46 pm

yea, the synth. that thing is like ahhhhhhhhhhhh

the downswoop is fine... the high pitch noise :-S

8bitwonder · Post by **8bitwonder** » Sun Apr 02, 2006 2:52 pm

all i gotta say is puuuuulllluuup tune-

fullyrecordingz · Post by **fullyrecordingz** » Sun Apr 02, 2006 4:21 pm

heard that bass line in a a different tune, sounds like its been chopped and sped up

grim · Post by **grim** » Sun Apr 02, 2006 5:35 pm

its ripped from kraftwerk ffs!

check my dub step tune

check my dub step tune

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